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Oh My Lord - Please tell me you update at least semi-regularly! I love this fic -its so absolutely heart wrenching at times that i started crying in a few places. Please keep up the wonderful writing.

Yay an update, i was getting worried i thought u had given up on the story.
Im sorry to hear things arent going well for you but i hope they get better soon.
A good chapter and i look forward to an update.
vic xxxxx

huhu,
awesome chapter...:)
You know that I`m looking nearly every day for an update of your story?
I love it so much,I think I`m addicted...:)
I`m not sure,if I wanne know what Keeran will do,when he finds Devin
behind the curtains.
And a gag and a blindfold to stop Devins tears???How "nice" of him...grrrr.
He is such a neandertaler.But the cuddleing was sweet!
PLEEEEEEASE update soon,Jules

Ahhh finally! :D

You don't know how happy I got when I saw your email! You made my day! :D

Oh God! Am I not angry???! I will kill Keeran! >.< What did he think, treat a sick person like that?! >.<

Turning back on his little speech is soo hard?! Can't he just tell Devin that, that was for then and now it no linger necessary to service him for every little help?! O.O

Or maybe he doesn't know how he feel towards Devin,Still!!!

and he is causing Devin to catch a cold and worsen his already bad sate! :(

Sigh ... I think change wouldn't come around easily! ... how long more Devin can take this?!He might not get better at all ... :(

Enough with the story, I'm really sorry that every thing is going on well for you but hopefully things will start to get better! They always do! It's just the matter of time! ;)

But still, do update soon, otherwise, I will drive you crazy! :D :P you know how much I love this fic! ^_^ so please ;)

i LOVE this chapter :)
hoping th updates will be faster this time around :)

Arg!!! I feel like screaming at Keeran and shaking him and telling him "can't you just be clear about you want?! Like crystal clear?! Because clearly anyone else would get at least some of the hints your giving but he's been a slave for most of his life so he won't understand you're giving him things and being nice unless you tell him you dimwit!!" So many misunderstandings because Keeran is too emotionally stunted to be clear about things... grrrrrr. But I LOVED this update. And well I LOVE the story lol.
I usually hate master/slave stories because I feel the slaves are mostly very bland, stereotypical characters. But Devin... I really enjoy how you make us see his plight through his point of view, with his confusion, his want to please and yet his failure to do it properly, and the cage in his head that has him stuck in 'slave' mode, unable to see the things around him from another perspective. And of course his complete lack of social understanding of the people around him... But all that makes him all the more endearing and realistic. Keeran's a bastard but he's clearly very protective of whatever's 'his'. And that includes Devin. If only he would realise it...

I'm REALLY trying to keep an open mind about Kieran. But,he's really starting to disgust me. Don't know if that's what you want readers to fell, it's how I feel. Everyone around Devin seems oblivious as to why he acts the way he does. The new room gave me hope. Snak telling Devin he wasn't in the room for service, was another. Yet, don't see alot of good happening for him.

Thanks for the update. Hope things get better for you. :)

So good! Someone has to inform Devin about how he isn't a slave exactly anymore lol. He's too cute!

Great work here as always!

This may sound strange, but you write exhausted, apathetic misery *so* well. The confusing shift of the other characters' care and complete lack of concern for Devin's wellbeing is also spot on.

Hey ❤ you ❤ ~
we are still here and waiting for you~