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omg plz update soon just ah stalling in the middle like that hurts the brain

(17) The one guy Devin feels he can trust and who actually might like him back and now Keeran wants him to whip him, if Keeran isn't careful he's going to break Devin for good. I wonder what would make Keeran think that Devin would even be able to go through with the punishment, let alone be able to use a whip they're not easy to handle properly. I get the feeling Keeran thinks in terms of revenge and that's why he's doing this, he thinks Devin wants to get back at Snake but of course Devin doesn't think like that.
Going back to Snake and Devin, it's sad that he thinks Snake would hate him and want revenge for being punished when Snake is probably mad at himself for getting Devin hurt. Joey probably thinks he deserves to be punished even if he doesn't want to be whipped plus I couldn't see him holding this against Devin. But I wonder what the other guys think of what's happening to Joey because to them Devin is nothing better than a whore unlike Snake who is their comrade, I wonder if it would make them mad to see him hurt because of Devin. Thing is I still think that Snake would protect him from the other guys if he had to, I wonder if there will come a time Devin will ever be able to realize the true value of these kinds of relationships. Such an emotional story, I can't wait to see what happens next :)

omfg keeran. you friggin idiot!! how could you make devin use the whip on snake? is he blind or deaf or something? get a brain!!

this chapter made me tear up a bit - how do you do that?? it's simply amazing. poor devin (i want to say that every chapter, though). he needs someone stable. and keeran needs help for his own demented mind. i almost want to say that his sense of empathy is kinda screwed up. maybe it is XD

anyway, great chapter! i enjoyed reading it

Keeran is such a fucking bastard. There's no way poor Devin can whip Joey. :(

WHAT?! I'm so happy you updated this sooner this time! Again, I was checking back everyday and I will check back everyday once again. I feel so bad for Devin and I can't believe how confusing Keeran is! He needs to be nicer!!

Can't wait for more :]

oooh poor little one~

Aw thank you for the update!!!! The ending was mean letting poor devin punish Snake!! But I think his master is getting nicer!!! I hope everything will work out!!! Do we also get updates for nemo this time?? I really hope so because I love both storys!!!! See you!!

omg!!! Why does Devin have to suffer like this?!?!?!

huhu,
omg,I knew this would happen,Keeran is a real nutcase...
To whip his caretaker,exactly what Devins damaged mind needs....grrrrr.
Can`t anyone rescue Devin from this madhouse?Maybe Tobih?Please...:)
I`m so excited,can`t wait for more,Jules

Traxie, I luv ya. Really I do but damn...you gotta get Devin some help or out of there. I'm almost at the point were I just can't take it anymore...he needs some happiness in his life and a window seat is just not enough.

You're dragging my heart around for the kid.