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What a lovely story I stumbled upon!
Please keep updating, I'm hooked!

Really, there are two who need a doctor for the mind....i dont know which of them more, the pet or the master. Ok, the pet i do understand...so its the master who needs a good whipping and a doc..*frustrated*

I love this story ^-^ but i get so frustrated with there treating of devan....
Thank you for your hard work, cant wait for the next chapter ^-^

(19) I really can't imagine these two ever being happy together, maybe Devin could get to a point where he's at least comfortable but there's so many issues between the two and there just doesn't seem like they have much of a foundation to base anything on especially after everything Keeran's done to him. On the other hand I found it very cute that Devin's first reaction to Snake was to hug him, I could only have imagined Joey's reaction if he had actually done that :) Everytime they get to interact with each other I feel almost relieved that Devin has someone that he feels like he can trust, I wonder if Joey realizes how much Devin seems to rely on him and I don't just mean in the bringing food way. Maybe to get Devin out of the room Joey could let him tag along with him just when he's got things around the house to do, it would get Devin used to interacting a little more normally and he would be with someone he trusts and feels safe with. I'm interested to see what it is you are going to do with Devin because so far for someone who's mostly just stayed in his room he's had a very eventful time of things. Can't wait for the next update ^_^

Huhu,
awesome,two new chapters:)
I really don`t understand Keeran`s brainfunctions.Is he not abel to he feel,no is he not
sensitiv enough to feel that Devin doesn`t enjoy the sex with him?
Poor Devin,no wonder that he is still ill,nobody gives him the chance to heal...ts
Greetings,Jules

Love this story to bits!
I noticed a little irregularity, though... first he has his hands tied behind his back, but a moment later they are free so he can pleasure himself... I MIGHT have missed the freeing part, because it's late and I'm reading on sheer will... ;o) but if it's a glitch, I thought you might want to fix it...

Aww poor Devin *sigh*
He needs some love
I don't like the master

I love this story! I'm always excited when I see you've updated. I hope Devin gets better :(

poor raseberry [ name is alluding me right now]
dumb bum is his master XD in all serious if he thinks telling the boy to ignore everything is going to work... it wont. It would be like telling a puppy to stop being a puppy. it wont work. until a LONG time and he's a dog now xDgrrrrr

Hi Traxie :)

Thank you! :D really I didn't think that you would update in a week! thankkkkssssss ^_^

Again I am in university! best thing to make you feel a little better is reading the the new chapter of Forgotten! :D and a very nice, not to mention! ;)

but before I get to my mumbo jumbo thoughts, there is something I want to tell. I think there is something missing in the story! You wrote:

"My body reacted to my own touch better than it had to Master’s and I closed my eyes when I had a full erection cradled in my hand."

Did you mean Devin actually used his hands to bring himself to erection?! That is what I think by reading that paragraph! but his hands were tied by the tie, yes??? and I don't recall Keeran free Devin's hand?! so how could it be?! or did I miss something?!

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Ok back to story, wow I can't imagine that Keeran is really capable of behaving like this! :P lol I know I was mumbling about this for too long but seeing it actually happen is something else! Finally asking the question "why", or attempting to understand! :) Telling Devin what to do or what to expect is a good thing too! I hope he just keep his promises, even though Devin is not believing him, maybe in long term Devin could start and trust Keeran! maybe! it's too hard! Keeran should try harder in understanding Devin! should ask the "why" question more often! of course with out that look in his eyes! maybe more gently! which I don't think he is capable! so much from me! lol :D

Now that snake is back, it's better! at least Devin is not feeling that shitty after talking to him and knowing he is alright and not angry with him! but God! should Keeran use this method to get Devin do something?! what is it next?! lol maybe the next time he suggest: if you want to go out, you have to do that?! O.o but did he not notice the tears first?! I'm sure after seeing them, he understood why Devin was crying?!?!?! yes? no? he is smart, he should figured it out that Devin didn't enjoy it!!! yes??? do you thing a day will come that we see Devin enjoys himself with Keeran?! I hope so! u.u

emmm, I think it's about time that Keeran thinking about filling Devin's days with something beside the sex! maybe some books or education wouldn't be a bad idea?! really I don't know how someone can live on in a lonely room, can't do anything except eating and sleeping and having sex?! how long can he continue doing this?! I think if this continues severe depression will come too! and then Keeran has a bigger problem in his hands! and if he is growing to have some emotions for Kevin, which I believe he is, that's gonna be hard for him too! so maybe it's best he starts to make little attempts to make Devin a little happy! not like today, forcing it!!! not using the sex as a tool! ....

lol I talk too much! but hey you told us to say what we think! :D

So I will be back in a week or say ant tell you about my thoughts then! lol (yes, they are not finished yet! :P )

Thanks again for the update! ^_^

I love this whole story. A lot of reviewers are concerned with how Devin got his hands untied. When I read in the story:
"I twisted under Master, rotating my wrists caught under me until I could get them slip from the loosened hold of the tie and took over stimulating myself"
It stuck out in my mind because I was afraid Devin would get in trouble. I hope that quote answers some of the confusion other people have had.
I also understand why Master Keeran is using sex to get Devin to come out of his training. That is all Master Keeran understands. I think while Devin grows so too will Master Keeran, just my own thoughts.