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Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god you are back
and I am SO happy! I yelped when I saw your update... squealed really...
It's wonderful of course, and I can't wait to read more... soon? Right? Please?
XoXo

What a powerful and moving story. I really lost myself reading this. I feel so much sympathy for Devin. I wonder what he would do if he was free. I wish someone would rescue him and treat him well. Although I kind of love his master Kieran too. I can't wait to read the next chapter of this amazing story. I hope you are still working on it.

Traxie, it's been a while, too while!!! I mean I'm getting really worried! Has something happen to you?! cause it never took you so long to update.

Please just let us know if you are alright?!

Tnx

Please update this. I know its been a long time...but its so great!

I was just wondering, if everything is going on alright in your life? You used to update very frequently. I miss reading your updates, and I'm just dying to see what happens to Devin later on. Please don't abandon your story no matter what!

I nearly cried.

I face-palmed like nearly over 10 times.

I gasped.

I became a goldfish (temporarily)

... and I'm sorry for only reviewing you now, but, once i started reading it, i couldn't stop.
can't believe i thonned this whole thing nearly 20 chapters under 24hours

but.......................

it was a great read~
this sorta plot is just my kink, and devin's new master seems to be someone who'd take much better care of him than his previous master...
but well... 4 years of training will not go away just like that.
and after years of having to give service without having pleasure yourself... it's gonna be a hard habit to break.
i hope one day keeran would dig out of devin, all the so called 'training lessons' he was forced to obey. then maybe he'd understand the boy better yeah?

another thought came to me...
how would this story end?
so far, all the other similar like stories, about slaves/pet's and masters I've read hadn't ended yet.
things just keep getting worse and worse.
Everytime i read stories like these... i can't help but wonder, what's to happen to devin when he grows older?
hmmmm. its somethign to ponder over eh~

okay~

I shall have to wait now, like everyone else, for the next update~

and i really hope you don't mind only receiving a review from me, now... (I know some authors who do mind)
and I don't mind going back to review ya, if you want...

meep? *scurries away*

thank you and read you later!

- nekoii

Ok this is one of the best things that I ever read pleaaaaaaaaaseee updated is sooner me and my friends are looking forward it >__< I really like devin and I've conected with him so much that when he was panicing I was like panicing too thought I'm the type who won't care cry or care over characters in stories but I've read this one from 10 pm to 6 am and let me tell you I've read it over 5 times in 3 days and thought i had exsams lol and less that 3 week till now i've read it over 15 times and give it to some of my friends who are yaoi fan too they've read it too and we all wish for the next chapter
TT^TT we even have a topic of this story in a from that is in our own language and in the hiden place of from which only girls can see we all are all over this and analyzing every thing about this
and I've read other stroy of your I've read ain...and pain and like that one too you really like to torture your characters but Jason was more braver that Devin I'm going to strat read Nemo too >__< but plllllzzzzzz uploade this one too ( I'm like about going mad to know more about it for a while after i've read it over and over ( thought I've never had read aything this much the most beloved things I've read over aging wa around 3-4 times but this one I still wanna read it aging it's more that 15-16 ( I lost count @_@)
OMG more of this TT^TT * cry out of rooom banging her head to wall *

:C why haven't you been updating anymore? author's block? school keeping you busy? my worst fear is that you're dead!

T.T

Pleaseeeee

Hello! I hope there isn't anything happening in your life that's bothering you right now. I am enjoying your story immensely, I've probably read every chapter five times minimum! I love your characterization and Devin is a very plausible character. I hope that one day he will be able to find happiness, and maybe Keeran can stop being mean!