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for Forgotten

by traxie

person tmelange
schedule March 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story has completely sucked me in. I really like Joey, and though Keeran seems to try to be nice, I don't like him at all. He's too...volatile. I keep hoping that the pairing is gong to end up Snake/Devin. They seem to have a connection, though it has yet to be explored. Bravo on a great story. I hope to read more soon!
person Becka
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
homegirl. never. in. my life. have. i. ever. been. so. happy. to. get. an. e-mail.

I was SOOOO worried about you. I thought at first somethings had just come up and then time went on and i thought something had happened to you. Then i was sure you were dead. lying on the side of a finnish road dead with all you angsty genius dead with you. It was a sad couple of months for me. But your BACK!!! which means your not dead on the side of the road which is super. and you updated which is actually even better. haha

but back to the story. which by the way i love so much. Poor Devin and come on Keiren can you be more freaking clueless. The boy has serious issues, get him some therapy. anywho i am glad your back. so glad. keep writing. and put that NaNo story up because everything you write is sheer genius.

lots of love from the US of A

Becks.
person happey
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG today is my birthday, and seeing that you updated this story made my day just that much brighter!!!!!!! I think Keeran is going to start being nicer to Devin now. I'm just thinking though that it'll be really difficult for Devin to lead a normal life again, especially with all the abuse he's dealt with in the past. It's so nice to see him hugging Snake on his own initiative!
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg yay ur back, been waiting to read more forever...next one soon plz?
person GellyBelly
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Duuude, this story.. Omg sooo sad but addicting.
person clovermax
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow..Wonder if Keeran will ever find out who Devin really is and that he was sold to the pos that destroyed a kid. Maybe they can destroy the orphanage? learn to swim can Devin even read?
Thank you for writing. love it. even if your story moves me to tears
person kylee123
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Traxie. Thanks for the new chapters of Forgotten. It is so great to see an update to this wonderful story. I see that Keeran is getting a teeny bit better at understanding Devin. He is slowly learning how to approach the skittish Devin. Though Keeran is so hot tempered that I wonder if he will ever be able to keep his behavior under control. I loved the scene with Devin hugging Snake. I also loved the scene with Keeran holding Devin by the pool. The whole outside world is a novelty to Devin. There is so much that Keeran can share with him. Thank you for keeping up with this story. I love it so much and of course I want Devin to be happy. Take care. Keep up the good writing.

P.S. I also discovered AFF while following a Kolgrim story. I came here to read Foolish Games and then I found Forgotten as well. ♡
person little angel
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow 2 chapters woot :) This story is amazing and i cant wait for more. please update asap
person Fairy4u
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Stumbled upon your story, at first I am hesitant to continue. But you know what, all of the sudden I have teary eyes and can't stop my self to continue reading. I want to be inside your story and give Devin a hug. I am looking forward reading your next update.

If possible, can you send me an email if this story have been updated, please. Thank you for wring this amazing story.
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but I sure hope it gets happy some time. It's just so sad.