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i love this story.. i really do.... i hope you'll continue it to the very end... i don't think i've reviewed for this story up until now, so i'm taking the opportunity to do it... i'm glad it looks like devin is slowly coming out of his confused shell, and you've captured it so well how new it is to him, especially the feelings he's experiencing... i'm looking forward to see what's going to happen next, so please keep it up :)

just wanted to say that i've been following this story since the beginning... there was a time when i stopped going to aff for a while cuz i got so busy, but this was one of the first stories i searched when i came back :)

I miss you <3, thanx 4 the update
Keep them coming

=( Awwww... Poor wittle Devin. At least Keeran is actually trying to give the boy pleasure, as well as learn about the kid... I hope things continue to get better for the cutey, he deserves so much love!

THANK YOU for the updates, matey!!!! They are awesome, I almost cried in some parts XD You're really good at creating emotions in yer work, but you already knew that. lol ^_^ Can't wait for the next update!!!!!

Thanks for 2 chapters!!!!

A thought just entered my mind. What education did Devin have? Can he read and write?

Anyway, looking forward to the next update and your Nanowrimo story :)

I was so happy to see the update =D. I love Devin. He's such a mystery... he never talks about himself...what he likes, what he wants, his past...and Keeran is also a mistery, I mean, what does he want from Devin?, aside from sex anyway. At least he is trying to get to know him better; too bad Devin is always scared.
I thought it was funny how Keeran calls Joey Snake too haha.
I can't wait to keep reading more, I hope there's an update not so far from now =P.

I've missed this story and was so happy that you have posted two new chapters. Great work as usually and I'm hoping things will get easier for Devin. I hope he can at least feel a little safer and more open. If he let things out more maybe Keeran wouldn't get as upset. Well maybe he would or wouldn't, not really sure. I struggling to decide whether Keeran is better for Devin or should he be left alone and freed. Anywho all around good work and I look forward to the next update.

(21) He lets him go outside then threatens to cuff and whip him if he doesn't answer questions to his satisfaction, talk about mixed messages. I'm beginning to wonder if Keeran even knows what he wants. Part of me thinks he actually likes the idea of a little sex pet all to himself to play with anyway he wants, he just doesn't want to admit it. He also doesn't like the idea of being like Gennarelli, so he tries to get Devin to call him by name and pleasure him during sex and then he can justify what he's doing and think that he's not a bully like Gennarelli. It's too bad really because at the beginning of the chapter I was thinking that maybe Devin was relaxing being able to sleep with him and all, of course that was short lived because part of the reason he felt good was because Keeran had left, so a rather mixed bag there.

It's funny that you mention Ronan this chapter because I had been wondering about him and the fact that we hadn't seen much of him. Honestly I don't think that Keeran wants Ronan to see Devin because if he saw how he was being treated and how it was affecting him Ronan would definitely call his uncle on it. Keeran really wouldn't want to answer to Ronan because what would he say and he certainly wouldn't want to be reminded of what had happened to both Ronan and Devin at Gennarelli's place. Plus Ronan might realize that Devin is just a hurt and damaged boy/victim and if he told his uncle that how could Keeran continue to treat him the way that he is, it would be hard to treat him as his own sex slave when his nephew is wanting to be friends with him. It'll be interesting to see if Ronan makes an appearance again.

Then the ending with Snake was kind of cute in a sad way, I could just imagine Joey standing there completely baffled as to why Devin was sobbing on him. It was nice though that he was willing to just hold him for a bit while he got it all out, he probably realized he needed it without having to say anything. Again it makes me happy to see those two interact :)

Another wonderful chapter, I had forgotten about this story to be honest so it was nice to see an update and get to enjoy reading it again ^_^

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawww for gawds sake keeran.
you'd think devin'd take drugs willingly, on his own?
aarrrghhh.... stupid man...

and i think... things are going to go on getting messed up, if neither of them fess up.

Dewin needs to fess up everything that happened to him... thou the time when that happens is as good as never.
that boy wont utter a word unless directly asked about it.

and Keeran, seems to be totally oblivious as to what happens to pets/slaves kept for sexual purposes over extended periods of time.

these two have one messed up relationship~

*sighs* devin is one depressed individual... severely depressed.
he needs professional help, which im sure, he wont be getting...

this whooollleee situation is messed up... when is that boy coming again? i forgot his name, keeran's nephew.

anyway~! hope you'll update again, sometime.... soon? XD

thanks gods I thought something happened to you that you didn't updated I hope you won't have any serious problem at life
finally woooow I was reading the whole story again and again my friends thought I was going crazy lol
looks like keeran is behaving better with Devin somehow but still they won't understand each other completely
the part about drugs were scary I was panicing like devin
I can't wait for the next chapter
( by the way I've read all of your works more than 4-5 times i've read this one over 47 time lol ( I lost count) you write awesome @__@ ) keep the good work
thanks a lot
ps: oh and I've drawn some fan art too I 'll uploade it in DA or something later( not that good thought)