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for Forgotten

by traxie

person C
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just thought i would tellyou love this story, i just read all 21 episodes in one go and can't wait for more so please write soon xx
person kiki
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update? I'm still looking for more. what happened?
person mikeelf1
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you be ok it's 5 month TT^TT you didn't update any of stories I hope nothing bad happens to you
person Anon
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
person Fain
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, just read through it again and caught several things I hadn't noticed before. I really hope you are able to update it soon. 6 months is a long time T_T Please don't abandon it...
person Talana
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I swear, this story keeps making me cry. Of course, part of that could be my fault .... going so long between readings means I have to reread the entire thing just to remember where I am. ... heh.

Anyway, this is a marvelous story, and Devin is .... well, besides just pathetic, is very realistic and I feel myself feeling sorry for him so many times. Of course, Keeran isn't exactly helping, confusing him so much, the poor boy.

Keep up the good work

Allanasha
person Har
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man I hope you come back and finish this story I was just getting into it then BAM nothing lol
person bossy_foodshield
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i can't recall if i've ever reviewed for this story... i review often, but i felt the need to this time. i really love Forgotten. i've been with it since the beginning, and every chapter you write always manages to grasp my attention until the very last word. i hope that you'll be able to update soon. even though you haven't in a while, i still check regularly to see if you've put up something new :) especially with all that's happening to devin so far and the changes he's going through. it's exciting to see how's he's developing.

i'll continue to wait for your updates (unless you're sick or something; then it's understandable that you haven't updated... knock on wood), and i hope you won't drop the story suddenly (fyi: your Forgotten is one of the few stories i'll wait forever for, but i'm no saint :P)
person kylee123
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi Traxie. I hope you are okay and that we will see an update to Forgotten soon. To me the story feels as if it is at the halfway point. I am guessing that it was designed to be around 40 chapters. I think the story is so great that you should definitely try to finish it but it might take a very long time to get those 40 chapters out. I hope you will be able to work it so that the story does get an ending. You have such a talent for writing. Maybe you could end up publishing it when you are finished. Anyway take care and I hope to see an update soon.
person kiki
schedule August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
update?