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Poor boy!He's so confused. I like how Keeran is backing off though. He's trying to respect him even though he doesn't know it and I'm glad to see that he's managed to make it around other people. He's showing signs of starting to get better though it seems. He's starting to hope again and that makes me happy. I'm glad you updated so quick and I can't wait for the next chapter. I like these new developments. Will we ever see Ronan(?) again? It would be nice if they could be friends though Keeran didn't seem thrilled with that idea at all so maybe not.

Love the angst. Watching Devin overcome being a sex slave is going to be interesting.

So glad you updated! I kept chapter 21 bookmarked in hope that you would continue. Even though it has been a while the flow has not been interrupted. Also, I still feel the same emotions from all the characters.
I hope Devin will get the help he needs in the shrink and not be as skittish as a deer anymore.

I wonder what happenEd to that other kid, Keerans nephew? Poor devin isn't doing so well, I hope thing get much better sooner! I'm sorry to say, but I dislike Keeran he doesn't seem like a very good person, not much better than Devin's old master! Can't wait for the next chapter though!

oh god, I hope he doesn't vomit :( ahhhh...kid needs a break. He needs to just go away and be with unthreatening things! like children? puppies?? i don't know haha something good though. and oh yesh, tears were had. lots of them. :)

Wow... What a story... I read all of it without taking a single break. It is that good! Hope you will be updating soon though.

Poor Devin. He kind of has a better master now. Keeran seems to actually kind of like him, but poor Devin can’t get out of his past mindset. I hope that eventually Devin just tells them all that happened to him and they get him some type of help. I don’t think he will ever get out of his training mindset otherwise. I hope they don’t drug him though. I don’t think Keeran understands why Devin liked to be drugged at times. I don’t think he really understands Devin at all, at least right now. I like Snake, but I think that’s more because Devin really likes him than anything else. He hasn’t really come to Devin’s rescue though I think he does care what happens to him. I’m not sure of where this story is going though. Will Devin eventually be happy with someone, Snake or Keeran? Or will he get his happy ending by being set free and be on his own somehow? I would like Devin to end up happy with someone, but I can’t see that realistically happening unless he sees a ‘shrink’. His mind is a little to warped right now and he needs more than a master who is sometimes nice to him to make it better it seems. Really good story though. I like how you let us see outside of the room at times and what happens at each different excursion. It breaks up the monotony of the room. And I want to hug poor Devin. He can’t seem to stop crying, no matter what emotion he’s feeling. I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

Hi. I am enjoying this story and looking forward to the happy ending that you promise. Though please don't let him fall in love with Keeran and then live happily ever after, I hate the character (which is a testament to your good writing skills and the emption you can engender) and with the amount of abuse Devin has suffered and the fear, he would never be able to love someone just becuase they start treating him a little better, it would be nothing more than stockholme syndrome. I don't think I could continue to read the story if this was the case and as I sais I am enjoying it x

(22) Again the interaction between Joey and Devin was just wonderful, I loved Devin's reaction to the spinach, it's nice to see that little bit of personality coming through.^^ And the shrink was an unexpected surprise and I would think a welcome one, although I wonder if it will actually change anything.

It's great to see you updating again, I'm glad we're going to get to see more of this story and I look forward to the next chapter :)

SWEET BABY JESUS, I CRIED NON-STOP THROUGH ALL 22 CHAPTERS WHICH I READ ALL OF JUST NOW. Ohmygod poor baby, I have serious urges to wrap him up in like, the softest fleece known to mankind and stuff him full of cookies homgd this story is so flippin heartbreaking. I not only CRIED, I legitimately SOBBED at several parts. Ugghghhghhh my nose is all plugged up now and my eyes are all puffy and glazed over! You. Why are you so amazing. Stop being so amazing! No, don't stop. Please to be writing forever and ever. So yes. Great story. Loved every hiccuping sob this wrenched out of me.