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Not sure if I've reviewed this. I'm sucker for a main character who manages to pull himself up and prove he's not weak. Watching Devin stand up for himself in a life or death situation was vindicating. Read this from beginning to end in a few days and I'm eager for another update. :)

Wow! Its coming to an end already. Thank you so much for the wonderful chapter. can't wait for Raspberry and Keeren alone time! Hope you will continue with Forever Ignored too. Its also a favourite!

I have to say I think this has been one of my favorite stories on AFF ;) I'm really sad to see it's over and would have liked to see more developments between Keeran and Devin towards the end.. but like i said it's one of my favorites so of course I would love to see more. It's been awhile though so I know you must want this finished already.. but if there's ever a sequal or series of shorts for this then you would receive many internet cookies ;)

Keep writing great things!

Awwww!!! PETE!!!!! That was the traitor!!!!!!

SO glad Devin is back home in the bosom of those that love him!!!!!

This has been a great read!!!!! Thanks again Traxie!!!!

Hope all is going well for you and yours!!!!

R

Fast update ! :)
Devin is safe !! Yeah !
I was sure the traitor was military ! He was very cruel...
You can add all the chapter you want ! It's not a problem ! :))

At the beginning I was thinking that this really wasn't my kind of story, but your writing pulled me in and I found that not only did I stay up WAY too late reading it, it was the first thing I thought about when I woke up. I cried several times, too. Good job, and I'm looking forward to reading the epilogue.

Now I don't want to come off like the Spelling and Grammar Police...but seriously, I AM the the Spelling and Grammar Police. I can shrug off most of the mistakes I saw as one-off typos, but there were two that you made consistently, and at the risk of offending, I am going to mention them here. You repeatedly used the word "staid" (an adjective meaning: Sedate, respectable, and unadventurous) instead of the word "stayed" (a verb meaning: to remain in the same place). You also (and this mistake is much more common recently, and drives me nuts) used the word "loose" (which, when used as a verb, means to set free) instead of the word "lose" ( a verb that means be deprived of or cease to have something).

I would love to find out how Keeran and Joey found Devin. I would think Keeran would have been angrier with Gennarelli and want him to suffer a slow and agonizing death for what he did to Devin and Ronan too. Anyhoo, I am sad to see this coming to a conclusion but very happy you found time to remember your readers. I really adore reading 'Forever Ignored' and hope you can find time to continue with it too.

(43) I think Devin could do without anymore adventures for the rest of his life the poor kid. But thank goodness he's safe and back at Joey's where he belongs :) I suppose if there is a plus side it's that they don't have to worry about Gennarelli ever again, hopefully Devin's stronger this time and it won't take as long for him to come around.

I'm looking forward to the epilogue and getting to find out where you see Devin in the future, can't wait for the update^^

Grrrr - that guy is such an asshole - I hope Keeran takes the bullwhip to him!

Thanks for updating Lady - I had a few chapters to catch up - we both been busy it seems - but angsty and lovely as usual. I'm so glad Devin is finally coming out of his shell!

I'm excited and sad that the story is almost done, but I can't wait to start reading the next story also.

Huggles =^,^=

Ohhhh this was too short Traxie! and now that finally Devin accepted my beloved Keeran! T.T I want more! More of these two ...

lol, you be surprised how much I fantasized about these two! So don't blame me for wanting more! :P

But anyways, thank you very much for the quick update! Hopefully everything turns happy at the end but actually I am so sad that this story is going to be finished! I wish you just keep writing about these two well three! We have been living with these characters for years now! It's just hard to imagine life without them! ^_^ You know that how much we love this story and it is my number one favourite story/book ever! <3

All I am trying to say is: Thank you for sharing it with us! xoxo