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I was so excited to see an update on this story! I'm really looking forward to seeing if Devin heals. His relationship with Keeran is getting really interesting--I like that he found a therapist for Devin and I wonder if Devin will find the inner strength he needs to deal with his awful past. So glad to see you're still writing this. Thanks and I can't wait for the next update!

I just stated reading and I love your writing style and everything I really just couldn't stop reading. I can't wait for the next chapter.

(23) I love how Snake doesn't even really need to ask he just knows Devin well enough to know that he didn't say a word to the doctor. I don't know if Joey really understands Devin but his matter-of-fact way of dealing with him does seem to work. (granted snake also hasn't taken advantage of him so that could help)

As for Keeran he continues to frustrate, I think one of the major things is he isn't very clear about what he wants. He seems surprised that Devin was expecting punishment and at the same time he has a hand around his throat, plus he got angry because Devin felt faint which really isn't something that you can control.

It just occurred to me that Keeran is just so much older and more experienced than Devin, regardless of what Devin's physical age is (i can't remember it actually). Mentally Devin's a sweet kid who should be experimenting and figuring things out for himself (and that's if he was anywhere near normal), not dealing with the demands of a very dominant man, if that makes any kind of sense. Kind of makes you wonder what Keeran is doing with him instead of being with someone more on his own level.

So many things to think about, I hope the shrink can help but I get the feeling that if Keeran isn't willing to change (although we do see little things) than this isn't going to be fixed anytime soon and considering how badly off Devin is this could be an extremely long process, can Keeran even hold out for that long? Looking forward to the next chapter, I hope the dinner doesn't go too badly for Devin but I get the feeling these grand gestures on Keeran's part are entirely the wrong way to go about things. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

I thinks it's time to leave something because I just LOVE this story. I read it ten ot even twenty times and each time, you make me shivers with the intensity of Devin's feelings and of his relationship with Keeran. So I hope you'll continue this story because I'm stalking you for an update!

I have just one wish: to have the point of view of Keeran, to see the evolution of his feeling toward Devin.

And in my crazy mind, I think that Devin is afraid of the meal because he thinks that his punishment for disobeying will be to serve all the men in the room. Am I mistaking? I think not but I will have the answer soon.

So congratulation for the great job and keep going!

Bye, see you soon.

Oh my God. Oh. My God.

You updated!

This story is one that I often came back to reread. I can say that this is going to be a delicious treat before bed time. I love you, please don't ever stop writing.

*Off to read.

Been reading Forgotten since 8 today and I must say, I love it!

I'm only till chapter 19, gonna read the rest via read it later soon (:

Cheers and keep up the awesome, writer!

Okay... done reading.

It was tense and good as ever. Usually I am easily annoyed with boneless and weak to the core character. But you make Devin so lovable, and Keeran is not perfect, but God, I know he's trying.

The thing with Devin's pov is that he is unreliable narrator. He tells us things that he believed from his perspective. It is good to understand his character and his way of thinking. But on the other side, reader needs to try decode more than what is shown. But this doesn't mean that we got to see other character's pov to get into the story. It's perfect like this (although I don't mind some Keeran's pov extra after the story finished lol).

Thank you so much.

Yay, glad to see such a quick update! Poor kid, I feel bad for him but it's nice to see Keeran is trying to help. Of course, I don't think he'll ever truly heal while he's still being kept as a sex slave, but it's good that he has at least some mercy in his life now. Hope to see another update soon!

I just can't tell you how I feel whenever I see you have updated! ^_^

Poor Devin! He is sooo messed up and even with the shrink I think it will take a long long time to get any results.

Meanwhile, I am falling more in love with Keeran :D he is restraining himself now. I think he starts to see why Devin behaves the way he does. Apparently he cares a lot now and it's good to see he does not accept sex from Devin just because it's been offered! It seems he is looking to have it when it's wanted from Devin's side too and when Devin is willing himself too! I just wonder how long this could last?!!!

and Devin! he is so confused with this new master, and if Keeran could keep this up, Devin might come to expect the unusual from him! He might get used to it! I hope! I think encountering with Keeran, in long run, was is not the best, one of good things that has happened to Devin! (not considering the beatings and stuff)

It's a challenge for me even to think how things could work out and writing it step by step does need a great talent, which I do not have and you are awsome because of that! ^_^

Thanks again for the updates, You can't imagine how I missed this story and I how many times I read it during this past year and checking AFF to see if you have updated?! Just thanksssss xoxo

I don`t know if i could eat, while sitting among
the men who raped me..."nice" move Keeran...tz.
But i think it`s cute, when he calls him Raspberry...:)
I really love snake, wish we would get to know him better.
Your story is one of my favourite here, it`s good to have you
back. Please keep going :)