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You are killing me. One step forward, three steps back. I know it's a bigger bedroom. I know Keeran is trying something but now all I can think of is that Devin's lost his window. Argh. Get some tissues and keep writing!

I love this story. Thanks so much for sharing it^^

if this keep on he is going to collapse becasue of being sleepless :(((((

Yaaayyy!!!!! An update. THANK YOU so much!! Devin is adorable. I just want to scoop him up and make everything better. Can't wait to find out what happens next and how his relationship with Keeran will progress. Please write more and update again soon. Pretty please? With lots of goodies and cookies on top.

BTW, on a side note, I just read Pain and.. pain? Loved Jason and Chris, but I felt like some things were left unresolved, like his dad, and with Troy and Ben, and what happens to Tristan (does Jason still get to see him?). I was also kind of hoping for a confrontation between Kevin and Jonathan, with Jonathan coming after Jason again and Kevin beating the shit out of him, before calling the police. Anyway, if you ever feel like writing about characters from Pain and.. pain?, can I suggest maybe a oneshot about Jason graduating high school, with a graduation party and maybe plans for the future? Well, it's just a thought. Thanks for all the hard work you put into writing, and the great stories.

This story is sooo good, it's unbelievable x)
Every time you post a new chapter I can't help hoping it would be longer (even though it actually is).
I just love it!

I have thought of at least 5 different ways that Keeran could react to the news! Getting angry at first and then on the second thought, thinks about "why"? and then comes the answer that even Devin didn't want to acknowledge!!!

Ahhh, I just want to know want happen so badly ... Pleaseeeee update soon (puppy eyes begging) pleaaseeeeeeee ...

can't wait for more I'm checking this page every day 5_6 times or more plzzz XD I wish there was a way to know when the chapter is out

(24) I like Tobih for the straightforward man he is, not afraid to speak up when something is wrong. It's too bad Keeran likes yes-men, it would do him good to have people who say things even if they're contradictory to what he wants to hear. I'll give Joey credit he tries to point things out, he noticed at dinner when Devin was full and Keeran could have just excused Devin from finishing. Of course he doesn't and it starts to feel more like a power play and less about Devin's wellbeing, Keeran just doesn't understand slow and steady he just jumps into an idea. From Devin's point of view you can see how chaotic this would all seem. It reminds me of taking care of a kid, the best thing is routine the same thing over and over, it makes them feel secure to know what's going to happen. Now to Keeran that probably sounds dull and boring but it works, look how calm Devin is with Joey he knows what to expect. It'll be interesting to see what Tobih says to Keeran and if he actually changes in anyway because let's be honest he's completely disregarded instructions in the past. Definitely looking forward to the next update :)

I feel like if Devin had a catch phrase (besides "Im sorry, Master" haha) it would be "It is better to face the certainty of misery than the misery of uncertainty" Love reading about his progress :)

Wow,
I wanted to scream at some of your characters (Keeran mostly) for being so blind and not realising what was going on.
Amazing story. I really got drawn in to it and you write the effects of abuse heartbreakingly well.

hope to read more soon.
Leoward