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August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Have been patiently waiting for this update, Thank you. So happy on what's happening now between Devin and Kerran. I like Snake as Devin caretaker, he care about Devin. Looking forward for the next update.
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please ...
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You know, whatever else I read or think about, in the end it comes to Forgotten! I just can't get enough of it and I read again and again and nowadays I am thinking about Keeran's feelings! It's really hard for me to describe or even just imagine what's going on in his mind?! I mean from the beginning till now. So much has been change but I cannot figure out all his actions!!! I mean this has become a struggle for me and I am trying to write the story from Keeran's POV from beginning (in my mind)and this really is a hard task. I have come to so many questions about Keeran that I would like to ask you ... Someday, if I find a time for it, I'd like to write a fan fiction for Forgotten ^_^ Can I? Do I have your permission?! I really like to write about Keeran :P
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and back to the main topic: Pleaseeeeeeee ... please update =( *.* )=
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You know, whatever else I read or think about, in the end it comes to Forgotten! I just can't get enough of it and I read again and again and nowadays I am thinking about Keeran's feelings! It's really hard for me to describe or even just imagine what's going on in his mind?! I mean from the beginning till now. So much has been change but I cannot figure out all his actions!!! I mean this has become a struggle for me and I am trying to write the story from Keeran's POV from beginning (in my mind)and this really is a hard task. I have come to so many questions about Keeran that I would like to ask you ... Someday, if I find a time for it, I'd like to write a fan fiction for Forgotten ^_^ Can I? Do I have your permission?! I really like to write about Keeran :P
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and back to the main topic: Pleaseeeeeeee ... please update =( *.* )=
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Traxir
Today I read your fic once again, I never get tired of it, so please, please, PLEASE, update soon.
Ok, sorry, I know you have a real life and maybe you are busy with it, but please don't forget us. ^^
Sarah.
Today I read your fic once again, I never get tired of it, so please, please, PLEASE, update soon.
Ok, sorry, I know you have a real life and maybe you are busy with it, but please don't forget us. ^^
Sarah.
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August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I know it's Traxie. ^^
*stupid keyboard*
*stupid keyboard*
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad to see you writing again! I love this story so so much (I check my email obsessively on the weekends). I'm glad that Keeran is trying so hard to understand Devin. Although he still has a lot of difficulties. :) Snake is fast becoming my favorite character. He seems to be the only one who actually gets what Devin's thinking.
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August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update I cant wait to read more
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August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I read this whole thing in one sitting! I love Snake, he's just what Devin needs for a caretaker. Devin needs to open up more and tell the Keeran anything he wanted to know.
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! Two weeks and no update ! LOL
Don't forget us, please... ;)
Update your wonderful story soon...
Don't forget us, please... ;)
Update your wonderful story soon...
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August 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's official now. I'm addicted to your story. I wish Devin can find hapiness, although I know he will never be like a normal person after all the abuse he's been through. Please, please, please update soon. I want to know more.
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for the late review Traxie,
I have been on a journey again while you updated! It reminded my of last year when I read 3 updates in a hotel room! This was the first for this year! and man, how tired I was and seeing you updated in the middle of night was just like a gift to make my day even more! ^_^
We were traveling to Ottawa, and from there to Montreal and Quebec City, and all the way from this city to another, I was reading Forgotten on my laptop on the back seats! for the 100th time! :D It seems like I never get tired of reading this story and I practically know it word by word but it's interesting to see every time I read it again, it seems like I get to know the characters better and better and feel closer and closer to them ^_^
Well back to the review, I think the first thing that catches my eyes in this chapter more than anything else was the fact that Devin could actually sleep after more than a week of sleeplessness!! :D although you mention it: "I refused to say out loud what I hadn't admitted to even myself yet" I think Devin is smart enough to catch it now, that he has other feelings for Keeran apart from fear and anticipation! ^_^
Second was how accurately Keeran can read Devin now!!!!! O.O It seems like he can read Devin's mind, sense his fears and the fact that he hasn't had sex with Devin for more than 10 days, shows a big difference in his attitude! It seems like now he really cares how Devin feels about the whole things going on between them! He has become more considerate and well you know how much I like him :P
The fact that he regrets hurting Devin and tries to understand what is going on, on Devin's mind ...
Third the relation between Joey and Devin! It's just endearing! ^_^ How both of them care for each other! Joey has become a big brother to Devin or at least that's what I feel from these two! :P I hope Joey make more pancakes for Devin ^_^
Forth, Devin actually find the courage to ask for something, even if it is to help but I noticed that this is the very first time he ask for anything!!! :D Well I call it progress and I actually think, it can help him settles in more! Just if Keeran doesn't show one of his tempers about this! I was/am a little curious about how these men think about Devin, locking him in a room, without having anything to do, even in a room with a nice view!!!??? I thought that maybe Tobih had recommended them to give Devin something to do! Even maybe give him a book to read or maybe let him study a little bit!
I know I know that until a little bit ago, they only look at Devin as a whore or something to fuck, (only saying it out loud make me shiver) but still ... since Keeran starts to care ... maybe, I mean I hope ... lol, I am babbling now! :P
I hope it's getting better and better for Devin but honestly I don't want you to finish this story! :( I mean couldn't you write it forever?! :D maybe even afterwards that everything turns better?! until Devin becomes 100 years old?! :D That would be awsome! lol
I hadn't time to read your other story yet! I am gonna go and get on with it! ;)
Thanks for the quick updates! you really make my day when you updates ^_^
I have been on a journey again while you updated! It reminded my of last year when I read 3 updates in a hotel room! This was the first for this year! and man, how tired I was and seeing you updated in the middle of night was just like a gift to make my day even more! ^_^
We were traveling to Ottawa, and from there to Montreal and Quebec City, and all the way from this city to another, I was reading Forgotten on my laptop on the back seats! for the 100th time! :D It seems like I never get tired of reading this story and I practically know it word by word but it's interesting to see every time I read it again, it seems like I get to know the characters better and better and feel closer and closer to them ^_^
Well back to the review, I think the first thing that catches my eyes in this chapter more than anything else was the fact that Devin could actually sleep after more than a week of sleeplessness!! :D although you mention it: "I refused to say out loud what I hadn't admitted to even myself yet" I think Devin is smart enough to catch it now, that he has other feelings for Keeran apart from fear and anticipation! ^_^
Second was how accurately Keeran can read Devin now!!!!! O.O It seems like he can read Devin's mind, sense his fears and the fact that he hasn't had sex with Devin for more than 10 days, shows a big difference in his attitude! It seems like now he really cares how Devin feels about the whole things going on between them! He has become more considerate and well you know how much I like him :P
The fact that he regrets hurting Devin and tries to understand what is going on, on Devin's mind ...
Third the relation between Joey and Devin! It's just endearing! ^_^ How both of them care for each other! Joey has become a big brother to Devin or at least that's what I feel from these two! :P I hope Joey make more pancakes for Devin ^_^
Forth, Devin actually find the courage to ask for something, even if it is to help but I noticed that this is the very first time he ask for anything!!! :D Well I call it progress and I actually think, it can help him settles in more! Just if Keeran doesn't show one of his tempers about this! I was/am a little curious about how these men think about Devin, locking him in a room, without having anything to do, even in a room with a nice view!!!??? I thought that maybe Tobih had recommended them to give Devin something to do! Even maybe give him a book to read or maybe let him study a little bit!
I know I know that until a little bit ago, they only look at Devin as a whore or something to fuck, (only saying it out loud make me shiver) but still ... since Keeran starts to care ... maybe, I mean I hope ... lol, I am babbling now! :P
I hope it's getting better and better for Devin but honestly I don't want you to finish this story! :( I mean couldn't you write it forever?! :D maybe even afterwards that everything turns better?! until Devin becomes 100 years old?! :D That would be awsome! lol
I hadn't time to read your other story yet! I am gonna go and get on with it! ;)
Thanks for the quick updates! you really make my day when you updates ^_^