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Hope to see more soon!

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I have so many questions. Does Devin finally unwind enough to relate to Keeran? Do they finally find a shrink he can talk to? Can he talk to Tobiah? Can he finally tell his story so they know what he's been through? only you can answer these questions. Please update!!!!!!!!

I just found this story. :)
I stayed up most of the nite reading the first ten chapters, since I was hooked from the first. It's been very emotional reading and I've gottam say you're very good at telling the story and not rushing things. Every once in a while a turn of phrase will throw me but it's to be expected (I'm assuming that Enlish isn't your first language.)
I really hope that you'll finish this story as I would love to know how things turn out for Devin and Keeran!!! Update soon, pretty please!

Just to let you know, I love Devin's story and I miss the updates.:)

Keeran's getting better~ that's good. Except for that unneeded backhand the other time. So, he still has issues with the lil-cutie running away, but at least he doesn't have an issue with Devin having issues coz the kid is entitled to as many issues as he wants damnit~

Okay, hopes for your 'everything happening' in life happened and gives you a slice of time to type, so we can read :D
Really looking forward to seeing how this relationship will develop further, and how Devin can continue 'helping' around :D

@_@ I just read .I was waiting for 1year and 5 month checking this story nearly every day so I hope U don't rush this and if U update as you said once in a week that's really Good though we all have real life and I know it's hard work to do that but thanks for writing again and I hope you write Nemo too I was reading that one too lost count reading pain and pain over and over and forgotten I lost count reading too I'm nearly know every part of it XD

chapter 1-27. Woot! luved how the story wasn't rushed. usually when i read a story with your kinda theme, it's rushed at one point or time. you did a marvelous job making the story smooth. i am greatly anticipating more updates for this story and keep up the great work!

I really hate this Military fucker.Keeran should fire him and
all the other guys who raped poor Devin.Hm,but he too raped him...one can nearly
forget this fact.Today I read all chapters again and I`m a sucker for happy endings,
but there`s a big part of me, that really hates Keeran for all he did and realistically,
they can`t be a couple...-sniff-
Doesn`t it bother him, that Devin was used by half of his men?
Love, love, love Snake!!! He`s the only one, who contamplates about Devins feelings.
And I love how he gives Keeran hell.
Thanks for the update.

words cannot express how much i love this story. i almost didn't want to finish the last chapter when i realized it was incomplete. I'm hoping desperately that you will update it soon, or in the immediate future becuz i'm hooked, addicted, obsessed with this story and cannot wait to have a dose of it again.

Thanks for the new chapter. Devin will have a hard time making any recovery when he is trapped in that house with the men who raped him with Keeran's permission. Even a regular person would have a hard time relaxing with those ill intentioned people around, knowing that at just the slightest change in Keeran's whim, those men could be attacking him again. Keeran does not know what Devin is thinking but on the other hand, he also needs to decide what he wants. He cares about Devin enough to get a psychiatrist, but what are his intentions towards Devin? Does he want Devin to be a complete human being or just a slightly less traumatized bed slave? Maybe Devin would have an easier time moving forward if he knew what Keeran was feeling also. I can't wait to see what happens next. The story is just getting better with each chapter.