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for Forgotten

by traxie

schedule May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed this story along with pain...pain. I absolutely love your writing. Please continue to write more!!!
person Fairy4u
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So much Love you share to us by writing this story. So sad its the end, but I am looking forward for whatever more exiting stories you can share. Thank you.
person miles
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O.o
I know a story needs a last chapter but I feel like there is something missing...
Too fast I think. And the 'game' between Snake and Keeran is really OOC...
But, I love the happy ending !! :))
And I want to thank you for this great story. So many thrilling months reading you !
Can't wait for more...

person Roya7777
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
^_^

Finally! Keeran and Devin together! ^_^

I don't know how I feel?!!! I am mostly sad! I have read the whole story during past week, again, for the 100th time, and ... oh ... I am just in love with all of them! No more Devin and Keeran?! Seems like my life is over! T.T I really am in love with your story! Thank you, thank you very much for making so many of my days and the ones to come because I know that I am going to read Forgotten again and again until my last days :)
person kylee
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations Traxie! This story is truly a masterpiece. Devin is smiling at the end. I am so happy.
person Linika
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's the end, the end of Forgotten!
You have no idea how much I have loved this story. I'ts bittersweet to see it over, but all good things come to an end as they say. I personally wouldn't have minded seeing a bit more about Devin's recovery, but that wouldn't be necessary for the story, so I understand why it isn't there. This story will certainly get a few re-reads. You did a great job! I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!
person midnightsscream
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awhhhh. So cute!!!! I think it's really sweet that Snake and Keeran went through the motions of making it like a real day. Raspberry deserves it! great job!
person Anise
schedule May 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
(44) I still find the whole Keeran/Devin relationship a little off-putting but it was nice to end on such a happy note and get to see Devin in a good place :) Plus I loved that little bit between Keeran and Joey, they're such brats^^

This has been an absolutely wonderful story and something I always looked forward to seeing an update for and even when it was an extremely difficult situation to read about I never once wanted to stop. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write and share this story with us, I will certainly miss these guys :)
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This great story is ending T___T
Seems like much more could happened between Keeran and Devin.
Very sad for this to end. Hoping for a wonderfully long and happy ending epilogue!
person Tao
schedule May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
thank u, i liked the story and thank God that Joey and Devin didnt end up together! plese continue Forever Ignored too

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