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One month without update ! 'pout'
I hope everything is fine with you and real life... :))

I feel sorry for Devin, his new master really doesn't have a clue what to do with a trained slave huh? The poor kid is soooooo confused. Hopefully, some one will get a clue and give the poor kid some guidance... Still, he is making some... admittedly small, progress without it. ty for the update.

poor Devin... still far far far from 'getting better'.
and stupid Keeran... still far far far from 'understanding shit'.

where , how, when , are these two every gonna 'get' each other? both ways man...

Yes ! An update ! Thank you !
I think Keeran is jealous of Snake ! Because the boy is cool with his caretaker and not with him !
Even if Devin is a little more daring...
I hope he is going to ask Keeran about his life... I'm curious...
Great chapter :)

Thanks for the update:) I Like Snake, very much..

thanks for the new chapter!!!!! I love this story. Glad to see Devin making some changes.

Poor Devin, hopefully Keeran gets more patience! Snake/Joey is a sweetie ^_^

Happy to see an update! Great chapter!

Hey... It's me again! :D coming back to bug you! :P Where is our update?! I mean yours, I mean ... I really miss Devin and Keeran! again! ^_^

As a result, I read it again :P I already lost count of how many times I have read Forgotten. Anyway, the last chapter has different emotions welding up in me than the last time I reviewed! I think I have mood swings just like Keeran! :P

Something I didn't notice last time was about the part that Keeran showed up at the car washing scene, and how Devin retreat to gardens without anyone telling him or him getting permition! and it reminded me of the first time he was in garden and how he was afraid to move around and now he is moving freely! I guess Joey did tell him to take a break but still it seems Devin become bolder to actually retreat from Keeran's sight! ^_^ I just love the way you put these little stuff for us to see how the personalities are changing ...

I hope Keeran had caught that scared look and paled skin when he talk about dropping Devin's body somewhere and don't make a joke about it again! He is not considerate at all!!! >.<

and I hope Keeran get it that with only a rise of his voice, whatever he had gained with Devin could evaporate to thin air! Just a "don't cry" and Devin's back to "yes,sir". I really love to see Keeran shows some emotion. I mean I am sure Devin need some emotions to be ensured he is safe, that no one can hurt him again. I wish I could see Keeran hug Devin and tell him he likes him and would't let anyone else harm him ... but I think that's too much to ask from Keeran! He is just not the type! :( but I do feel Devin needs some hugging! not the force kind but the kind and warm type ^_^

and ... I really love to see Joey make some more pancakes for him :D please please, pretty please ...

and ...

please update ^_^ otherwise you have to read more of my so short reviews :P

This story is horrible...!

and I mean that in the sense that it has kept me up all night,
and that I've fallen head over heels in love. I'm full of emotion.
I'm not even partial to first person, but wow, I'm blown away.
Excellent character development, and just beautiful imagery. I just...am
blown away. You're amazing.
Okay, whew. Just had to get that off my chest.
Have my children.

& My name is Devin too, spelled the same way too. Gah. :3