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for Forgotten

by traxie

person miles
schedule December 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A lots of my favorites authors have updated this Christmas but you... 'sob'
Hope you're fine and you had a great Christmas. Come back soon...
person Roya7777
schedule December 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You are very cruel! You know that, don't you?! :D

Anyway, just finish reading the whole story again! lol I just can't get tired of reading Forgotten! I am in love! :P

Three questions:

1- Doesn't Keeran plan on taking Devin to a hairdresser?! :D His hair should be very long now! But I like long hairs anyway ;)

2- Isn't him worried about STDs? I mean how many men Devin has been with?! and they are not using any protection ... so?!

3- What was the blood test results?!

Pleaasssseeeee consider updating ^_^
person Lysian
schedule December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow this is intense, from his twisted way to him starting to be well sort of normal again, i can't wait for more. Love it, and his master, from being an evil to changeing his ways, figures hehehehe.
person Roya7777
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pretty pleaaaseeeee ...

November is over! Pleaseeeee T.T

Either Forgotten or Forever Ignored will do! Just give us an update pleaseee :(
person Quiyn
schedule November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First of all Can I say that this story is Freaking Awesome? I love your characters! Devin is a little crybaby but I understand why and Keeran is a bully -- a loveable one. Things would go so much smoother if he wasnt such a friggin hot head! Well anyways it is ridiculously late where I am so I'll leave you with some virtual, imaginary cookies for your stellar writing skills!! Here Here!
Oh and *kneels and clasps hands* Pleeeeeease update :)
person troubledwater
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So glad you're back! I was just looking at my very oldest Delicious links - I added this story the day I joined - Forgotten is not Forgotten.
person CHoman
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see an up date, iadore this story and I am hopingthat you will finish it. I need to know what happens! Please continue! Love it so much tha I reread the whole thing again.
schedule November 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're not going to drop any of your stories right? I hope not cause I really want to know what happens next:)
person Tristram
schedule November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help rereading the story again and have to say that the progressive character development is amazing! I love that D. is opening up and that he's found a good friendship with Snake/J. I also love imagining that K's jealous of Snake's closeness to the boy. I'd really like to see K. and D. talk more; for one thing I'm also curious about K. What is his job? What happened to his family? If he's got a nephew then he must have a sibbling. For another I think K. needs to know more about D. He really should know about what went on in the orphanages and if he hopes to develope a relationship with the boy then they should be able to at least talk together. He should know what D. does during his day and take more of an interest in his feelings. I'm so anxious for you to continue! I hope you come back soon and update.
person miles
schedule November 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, please... :)