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Is Devin in love with Snake ? Even a little ? O.o

Keeran doesn't touch Devin anymore but he wants too !
I think he wants Devin comes to him but I don't think that will ever happen...
Keep going, please ! Amazing story ! :)

FINALLY! Now if only Nemo could get started again.....This was a great ch though. I am a bit leery ofthe snake relationship. Too many similarities are becoming apparent with the "snake in the grass" phenomenon. In really hope snake manages to keep it together.

I see a little light at the end of the tunnel...:)
It`s first time that Devin thought something normal,like he doesn`t want to see
Keeran anymore. I hope that one day he can voice it.
And again it`s Snake who stands up for Devin.
Keeran treated him like dirt and I think he has to pay for that.
And will he ever apologize to Devin for all he put him through?
But I´m ranting,sorry.Still thinking of Forever Ignored....:)
I hope Devin is able to talk to Tobih about his feelings and his past.
And it would be nice, if someone teaches him something else than pain and fear.
Greetings, Jules

Getting really involved in this story. Love it...please continue writing it as I want to see what happens to Devin!

(29) I think Snake is Devin's own personal translator or instruction manual, he just seems to get him.^^ I like how he lets Devin try to speak for himself but at the same time is willing to back him up or step in if he thinks he needs to without just taking over and making all the decisions for him.

It was so cute how excited Devin got about seeing Snake's apartment and the fact that he's only one of a few that gets to see it must have made him feel very special and Devin deserves to feel special :) It's nice he found a place where you get to see him able to relax and not worry about what's going to happen next or if someone's going to appear and make him uncomfortable.

It's understandable why he would wish that he could stay with Joey, it's kind of sad that even though the situation has improved greatly for Devin he still doesn't have the ability to choose what he does or who he's with. He does seem to be excited about the schooling though and even if it seems to be completely accidental I'm glad Keeran was able to find something for him that he will look forward to. Let's just hope the tutor knows how to deal with abused kids for Devin's sake.

It was such a nice chapter to see after not having an update for awhile, I hope that we don't have to wait too long for the next part :) I'm certainly looking forward to what happens next ^_^

I like the chance that Devin has to learn. Wonder if that was true that he was being prepared to be a slave interesting idea.

Excellent chapter! I adore this story, please update again soon!

Thank you,Thank you,Thank you,Thank you,Thank you,Thank you,!!!!!!!! I've been waiting for an update. This is great! I like where this is going!!!!!

Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BD
I swear I like Keeran more than that Gennaeiwkejifjeaksjdf, something, guy

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