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for Forgotten

by traxie

person Dani
schedule January 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sigh, just when Devin was starting to relax a little and express desire for something (to himself, at least) Keeran had to mess it all up with his inattentiveness. And Snake knows immediately that Devin would be sad that he didn't get to study. This story is so good!
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the surprise update, but it ended all too soon. Give me more!
person miles
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohh ! Evil one ! ^^
Who came for him ? Humm, I think it's Snake.
And you're right Keeran can be a bitch ! A selfish, spoiled rich man !
'sigh' I was so sad for Devin...

Thanks for the fast update ! You made my day ! :)
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My heart went out to Devon! He was so excited to start his lessons and then it was just taken away from him thoughtlessly. I hope he ends up with Snake. Thanks for the quick update!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want to reach into the story and hug Devin and tell him everything will be alright. He really does need someone to talk with about his insecurities and stuff but who? Anyhoo, I think that both Devin and Snake jumped the gun so speak because to give Keeran the benefit of the doubt he did tell Peter let's take a 'raincheck' on Devin's lesson so that means he still intends to let him study and have lessons, right? This poor kid is still so messed up and I hope Keeran doesn't punish him for running out the door. I have a feeling it might be Snake who's come to get him.

Thanks for another fast update and keep them coming they make me happy!
person dazedandconfused
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I was wondering why can't Ronan visit Devin!!! He needs a friend, right?
person narrowdoorways@gmail.com
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't mind the wait. Each chapter is so well done and drama filled. As long as I get an update, I'm not going to complain! I'm really looking forward to what happens next. I want them to go easy on him!
person Kaykay
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy you started updating again. Keep up the good work:)
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh ur cliffs are killer want more plz
schedule January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you are back!! Though I feel a little upset that you would leave us all hanging like this in the middle of the fight.

Thank you again for a great chapter and I will keep checking for more updates.