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Hello there, it has definitely been a while so i figure I'm just going to jump right in:

Holaaayyy! Keeran is doing ALL the wrong things! I know that he would've let Devin go if he'd asked but Devin doesn't know that. Oh geez. I hope that this is at least Keeran finding Devin though it's probably in vain. I just wish that Keeran would know that he needs to retrain Devin. Make him say what is on his mind! Geez. I'm so disappointed in the guy. And snake is freaking awesome. He needs to be careful though, if Keeran finds out that Devin is partial to him...well I'm not quite sure what will happen but it won't be good. I like Snake alive thank you very much.And Tobih (or however his name is spelled) should have known that the shrink wouldn't neccessarily work. Well I think Devin will do a better job when talking to Tobih. Oh but Keeran! I love/hate this guy! Even after all this time you've got me so interested Traxie!! Damn you!!!! *shakes fist* lol

And thank you for the update :)

Thank you for the update. But, I am sad for Devin, he was truly looking forward going back to School

Please, pretty please try to update again soon. It's just not nice to keep us all hanging. And poor Devin! The poor thing was so excited to get to finish school. Keeran really just doesn't get him at all. I wonder how this whole thing is gonna play out. And is it Snake or Keeran who finds him by the pool? Can't wait to find out. (or is it neither, and one of Keeran's men finds him?) Keeran better not punish Devin for taking off. It's his fault anyway for not being able to understand how much start school again meant to Devin, and thus that he was devastated when Keeran cancelled it, not to mention scaring Devin with all the yelling when he was arguing with Snake. I'll try to be patient, but I really hope you can post the next chapter real soon. Thanks!

man, he's still so broken. and his master... damn he's a thick head. what's it going to take before he realises that the kid thinks as a slave.
sigh, things have got to get better right?

how did I miss this update?

but it is a good update! there's more smiles and laughter in this one than any other one I think :)
and Devin's thinking positively, FINALLY!

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!!! what a way to cliff-hang it???!!!!
And here I was just being happy that the previous chapter was good.

then Keeran goes and be the female-dog he is and cancels Devin's class... shit man, He was looking forward to it!!! You party pooper! argh!!!
Get back the teacher! Devin needs to go back to school!!!!

I love this story.....please please please please please continue updating it.

Excellent chapter Traxie. What a sad situation. Keeran loves Devin but Devin is too afraid to warm up to him. What can Keeran do to get Devin to see him with new eyes? Is there any hope for the two of them. I really hope that the two of them will be able to make a connection. I know that half the problem is that Keeran is so insensitive. They need to learn to talk to each other instead of the crying and intimidation game that they are playing right now. I wish they could take a vacation together.

Ugh. You always leave me wanting more! Love snake, he gets Devin and its adorable.
Also, I went on a binge of your stories the other day and naturally loved them ALL! Can't wait for updates, especially for Forever Ignored :)
XoXo

I can't believe you're writing again TTWTT I waited tooooooo long.....
oh BTw what happend to Ronan?...wasn't he in keeran's house?...
pleaaaseeeeeeeee keeep writinnggg pleaaaseeeeeee,,,,
and I was reading nemo too but ....for now KEEp THIS UPPP PLEAAAASEEEEE