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I just adore this story and this is another brilliant chapter. I am always so on edge for Raspberry; you write his sense of confusion, fear and uncertainty so well. It makes me happy that there's a bit more communication going on between everyone for now.

Thanks for the great new chapter Traxie. I was so nervous about Snake and Keeran and devin eating in the same room. It was like waiting for an explosion to happen. I am glad they managed to have a three way talk without losing their tempers. They even managed to communicate with Devin a little. I love this story so much. I can't wait to see what you have planned for these guys.

well, that was a far better fall out from what he's used to... and a bit of understanding has been reached between the three of them. all in all, a very hopeful chappie.

I love the idea of a threesome too. I think the more love Devin has, the better.

I want so slap Keeran...

He`s like a selfish little kid, who doesn`t want to share his toy.
I really hope it`s Snakel who`s searching for Devin and Keeran is lying passed out
on the kitchenfloor...:)
Please update soon, Jules

I LOVE this story! I am hoping Snake and Devin get together. They would be so good together.

Hi, I have been lurking around for the evening waiting to see if you would be updating but have to leave now because I have work early tomorrow morning. I was just wondering how your mojo is coming along and when we can expect another update.

I'm so happy I am no longer reduced to tears by your chapters, but I felt a bit sad about the skipped lessons as well. Also, I had totally forgotten about the flogging of Snake!! :O What a horrible reader I am...

Anyways, lovely chapter-and I hope nothing happens to our poor boy. :(

Ok, I have a random question: What ethnicity is Joey/Snake? 'Cause, in my head, he's black. Just sayin'.

Also, I can't wait to see where your story is heading! Keep up the good work! :)

(30) Sometimes I wonder just how much Joey likes working for Keeran.

I wonder who it is? I could see Joey telling Keeran to go to Devin, make him take some responsibility and talk to him. Or Keeran could have just told Joey to go find him, either one wouldn't be shocking. The second one seems highly likely since Keeran doesn't strike me as someone that wants to deal with real issues. Keeran just wants to do as he pleases and everyone is just supposed to go along with it.

I think it's why he likes that Devin is obedient and he can bully him, it absolves him of any responsibility or really thinking about what Devin needs. He does try grand gestures but it's the small things that mean the most. Devin's happy when he's learned to cook or he's following Joey around or getting to see his apartment. They may not seem important but to Devin those things count, he just wants to feel safe and Keeran isn't safe. It's too bad because he almost got it right with the tutor but because of his selfishness he managed to screw that up and he's so oblivious he doesn't even see it.

I really wonder if this can be fixed, they aren't in anything close to a relationship so you can't just say spend more time together or talk about your feelings and would Keeran even have the patience anyways. It's too bad he became interested in Devin sexually because if he had just decided to take him in to help him out Devin might have actually been better off. This story always gets me thinking (as you can tell by the incessant rambling^^) I like that you haven't rushed anything or had Keeran miraculously change or Devin suddenly get better. All difficult situations and it's going to be difficult solutions, maybe even something we may not expect. Can't wait to see who found Devin, maybe we'll be surprised :)