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Keeran? Thick? No...
LOL
Thanks for the update, I've really enjoyed the story so far and I'm hoping that you finish it! Please!

I've just discovered Adult Fanfiction.net. This was the first story I started reading. Have you delt with brainwashed/programed people? The way Devin reacts and how you show him thinking is so much like my cousin. She became involved with a religious group. When we got her back, it was years before she was "normal." There are still times when I can see her drift back to old patterns.
I look forward to the next installment. I just want to reach in, grab Keeran or Rick or even Snake and shake them till their teeth rattle sometimes.
This is an excelent story, so far. I hope for rapid updates.
Louie

I'm so glad I found this story,I adore this story,i love Keeran , devin please harry up and fall in love with him! :)
Thank you for the update,keep up the great work!

I love your stories!

It's great that they made process, however, little but still great process in the master's understanding of deevan.

Nick ! Of course he's still here !
I didn't think of him !! ^^'

And Snake is right ! Keeran can be so slow...
But the dinner was funny ! Now Snake wants to force feeding the boy on the place of Keeran !
And Snake is free and need to get laid !! :))
Is he gay too ?

Thank you for your hard work and steady update !! 'hugs'

Am so happy seeing all these updates!

Am still hoping he ultimately ends up with Master but recently have been swayed in the direction of all three together.... :P

Even with the subject matter, this story continues to brighten my week. Rest up and give some more.

Sorry you're tired but thanks for the new chapter. Maybe Keeran isn't as clueless as he was before. Great addition.

Sorry you are not feeling well and get some rest!

I sense happiness in Devon's future very soon so am very happy. Things are looking brighter for him and I too hope for a threesome relationship.