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threesome????? Oh God No! , please write what you want not what the readers want, thank u Traxie<3 Please update soon

man! you cant ever delete this fic you know?! The angsty feeling stays in my gut even after I've stopped reading and everytime you update, I reread the like 10 chapters before the new one. (that may be because I never remember where you're at :p) As per usual, I beg you to update asap. thank you!

I know it's not my imagination... I definetely felt some Snake jealousy in the last chapter!! I've been rooting for Devin/Joey from the beginning, so I'm curious to where you'll take this =)
Please keep the updates coming!

Wow wow wow~~~
I think this chapter spells out more about Snake and Keeran's relationship.
I mean, we know who's the boss... but Snake obviously has some special position too.
If I didn't know better, I would dare wagger that those two were once a pair. xDDD

and YAY! Devin gets to continue with his lessons!
I really hope Keeran won't seriously punish Devin for running away. it was only to the pool and he only did it because he was scared. that wouldn't be fair, to punish him.

ok, hoping to hear more! And hoping to see Devin get better, in some way. :)

NOOOOOOOOO!

Well, not really. The story abruptly ending on me wasn't as bad as Forever Ignored (still reeling thanks to that cliffy!)

At first, I didn't want to read Forgotten because the summary made it seem like it wasn't my kind of thing. Then I read it and devoured it in about two days D: (i curse my fast reading). Twas a yummy fic ♥

BUT WHAT I REALLY WANTED TO SAY WAS: NOOOOOOOOoOOoooOo!

Devin should be with Keeran and not Snake D: he can like snake, but not be with him! /commands/whips

(31) So a bit of a surprise with who fetched Devin but I suppose Joey and Keeran were a little busy licking their respective wounds ;) I'm not too concerned though since I doubt this was the first time these two have fought. One good thing that came of this is that Keeran actually seemed to soften up and shockingly enough he seemed to be paying attention and learning all at the same time, there's hope yet :)

Now I'm glad that things seem to be getting better but I still worry about the future between these two. It's hard to imagine this as a long-term or forever relationship, I worry that at some point Keeran is going to want to have someone that's more of a partner to him. Relationships end all the time for all kinds of reasons plus if Keeran's in as nasty a business as I think he is something could happen to him, it just makes me worried about how uncertain Devin's life is. Of course I'm getting rather ahead of myself, we don't even know how this is all going to work out ;)

I liked how you snuck in a little bit of info on Joey, seems he doesn't have anyone although you also didn't give any clue if he even liked men or women (or both), so still a little bit of mystery there. I'm also wondering if this is the beginning of a setup to something happening with him, unfortunately my hope of Joey/Devin is probably wishful thinking.^^

As always it's got me thinking and excited about the next chapter, so much going on, so much to look forward to ^_^

i'm loving your recent writing speed :) keep it up honey!! always loved this genre and yours is exemplary work, reading it makes me heart twinge and ache, but oh so deliciously, like a thrilling twist of the knife in the ribs! this story is beginning to have the makings of a threesome, dare i so hope? Also, have you read others in this genre? like the violet and the tom by ocotillo, which is role reversal, or like xanthe's 24/7, a classic! In comparison, yours is more raw and primal, of baser desires and needs. I like it :)

This is so well written, the type of story where the readers get super invested in the main character- including me! My own little wish is that Devin doesn't end up with anyone romantically, and regains authority over his mind and body. Obviously, Snake would be the better match, but I feel like Devin needs a platonic relationship that doesn't involve lust.

Love Snake who keeps reminding Keeran that "Rasberry" has been made to call his "owner" Master.

Thank you for the update. Much better, love it, communication is the key in a relationship. But for this two, they constantly need Snake bridge them. Poor Snake, in abstinance because of this two love birds. Love you.