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for Forgotten

by traxie

schedule June 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I am so glad to see your back and that you finished this story! It is good to see that Devlin is getting more confident and that Snake is stepping up and helping him! Thank you for writing and I hope to see more updates for your others stories!
person Nine
schedule June 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this story... for the last year or two it has become a part of my life. it is so weird that it is over and finished. thank you very much for continuing it and finishing it. I have had a lot of joy from this story!!! I am so happy that it ended sweetly for Devin. seriously! I love you!! *\(^o^)/*
person Ali-chan
schedule June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
a bit disappointed by the ending. I find it anticlimactic after the rollercoster of emotions the rest of the story put us through. glad that you completed it however and that it ends well with keeran and devin together
person Ikke
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
My, i had forgotten how much i liked this story, but its been so long i felt i had to re-read it all ^^. Looking forward to the update of forever ignored as well. I'm glad your back.
person helga1967
schedule May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent work. Extense, interesting, intense - I loved
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ugghhhhh!!!!!!!! I guess this is what I get for being a lurker and not regularly reviewing right? RIGHT??? Because the ending greatly disappointed me. There are still so many questions I have and so many things I wanted to see before this ends, like I don't know, watching Devon either become his own person more or watching him become loyal and pet-like to Keeran because I could see it go that way too. I wanted to watch him get over being afraid and get over being frail. We still don't know what Keeran REALLY does either... Just... GRRR! I'm going to go cry now. Good story though, you know, if you ever want to add a couple chapters... I wouldn't mind... Pleeaaassseeeee? As if that would help.
person Pagan
schedule May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The ending felt a bit rushed, but it was a happy ending, so I'll forgive it. ^_^ Personally, I would have been happy to see it go on for a lot more chapters, but that could just be me. (By the way, I didn't realize that English wasn't your first language until you mentioned it. You're very proficient.) Thanks for writing the story, it was quite the emotional roller coaster ride.
person Penny
schedule May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The End, noooooo. I, like all the above don't want this to end, it's been an amazing story a story that really pulled me in from the first chapter. I'm going to miss the guys soon much but I understand that you want to move onto other things. I also felt the last 2 updates were slightly rushed, yet I really appreciate the time and effort put into this story and thank you for not dropping it and actually finishing it. Well Done!
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Well done! Congrats on finding the time in your busy schedule to finally complete Devin's story. I was so happy for Devin in the end and that he found peace and happiness in a crazy world that abused him. I will miss Devin, Keeran, Snake and Ronan very much but am glad they are a family now.

I am excited you will now be focusing on Forever Ignored too!
person BlueRiver
schedule May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and have enjoyed it a lot. The ending though, seems a little bit rushed to me and I feel like it is missing a chapter or two. We are only informed how Devin got over his fear of Keeran in several sentences, and I think there should have been more to show us how that changed and not just a short summary in the Epilogue.

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