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Man, I juast wish you could crank the chapter out faster... I'm so anxious to find out what happens next that is so hard to wait. Love it, love Devin and I just want to grab him and wrap him in a blanket so I can protect him from the scary world he lives in!

Poor sweet Devin. He is like a little kid waiting for a spanking and unable to think about anything else. I am eager to see what Keeran has in mind. I hope that this punishment will be something that is satisfying for both Devin and Keeran.

(32) It's nice to see a more relaxed side to Joey and Keeran's relationship, I had begun to doubt that they were ever actually friends. Hopefully Devin can start to relax about their joking and roughhousing and maybe even learn what a 'normal' relationship/friendship is actually all about. It must be so confusing for him right now not being able to read a situation properly, there are good times and bad and that doesn't mean it's all going to end in a bloody mess. Although speaking of mess I'm thinking that fight was a long-time coming, Joey and Keeran had seemed strained for awhile but I'm glad things are working themselves out.

As always it was nice to see Tobih again, he such a sweet old man and he does seem to truly care. Plus I loved his comment about a younger Joey and Keeran, those two must have been absolute terrors as teenagers, I could only guess at what they must have gotten up to ;)

I'm looking forward to the next update as always but I'm worried about the punishment, I'm really hoping that Devin is misunderstanding what's about to happen, although with Keeran you never can tell. It makes me eager for the next chapter to find out what happens, the not knowing is worse than knowing but I will try to wait patiently :) I rambled again and I'm worried that with the site changes this is going to be a wall of text and if it does, sorry about that.^^

Thank you for an other update! I am so glad to see some positive development. Keeran seems to be learning how to deal with Devin and Devin seems to be opening up a bit more. I am a bit worried about the disciplining that is going to happen but somehow I trust Keeran and I think he will turn it into something surprising.

Hope to hear more form you soon.

Thank you very, very much for this new chapter! I danced around when I saw you updated! This story is awesome!!!!

I absolutely LOVE this story! I love all your stories actually ^^ Each time you update I "squee" inside! Please update your other stories as much as possible ^.^!

What a cliffie! Will he get punished or won't he? I hope you stay on top of this story so i can get the answer soon. Another great chapter!

Update ! Yay !

I was surprised when Tobih said he didn't know about Devin's past !

And I think Devin and Keeran don't have the same idea about discipline !!
Thanks for sharing... :)

I'm so happy you updated again: thank you, thank you. Now I'm ITCHING to read about the discipline!

Hi Traxie first time reviewing your story, only came arcoss it last week and hooked on this story. I wished Devin was able to speak to the Pychologist he really needs to get counselling poor thing or he might have a heart attack! He's so jumpy and fearful of everything yet there is strength within him an inner determination to live and get through whatever happens to him. Question....where are the women? No mention of even one woman, everyone in the household is male even the teacher (hoped for a woman) perhaps I missed something in previous chapters? Anyway liked this chapter as Keeran and Snake are caring more about Devin and his well being asking him questions without any threats although Devin thinks he's going to be punished again but I dont think Keeran will. Keeran seems to be taking a different approach to Devin which is good to see.
So I await the next chapter hoping that I'm right and Devin continues to grow stronger in body and mind and one day runs far away to live his own life without fear.