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I'm glad you've found again the joy in writing. I must say that it is clear in these last few chapters. Lovely writing as usual! I'm so glad that Devin, even if it has no lasting effects, is cozying up with Keenan!!! It's like a preview to the next step in their relationship. I mean I'm not happy about the guy being sick but that little moment was just so nice. Devin's punnishment surprised me but I feel that it's neccessary. I want Keenan and Devin together dammit!! I love Joey and all but the guy is a bit of a cock-blocker! He really does need to go out and meet somebody new. And Stephan or whatever the teacher's name is, seems like a hardass. That's cool, I like the idea of a more educated Devin. OH but now I'm left wondering...is Devin going to get worse, or better the next morning? And how is this going to affect my perferred couple? OoOoOoOoOoOoOoOoOo!!!!!!

-Quill

Not only am I breathing a sigh of relief...
There's a whoop of joy as well :)

Whooots!!! *pumps fists in the air*

Keeran, you are getting a golden star sticker for this chapter!

good goood goood, I hope this method he's using persists, it's a good method. better than what ever messed up technique he was using. Devin just needs to get healthier, and I mean that physically and mentally.
I see the hint of a possible happy ending!!! and I can't believe I'm saying that :)

There's more eager - happy - anticipation for the next chapter this time ^___^~
Looking forward for your update!

- nekoii

(33) Devin can't see Joey - that's practically cruel & unusual punishment ;) I had no idea there was such a thing as Joey withdrawal but apparently Devin proved it to be true.^^ It's not surprising since Joey always seemed to have a calming, centering affect on Devin, it'll be hard for him to not have that comfort there that he's gotten used to. I know Keeran is looking at this from the standpoint that the best way to discipline him is to take away things that he likes and Joey is definitely one of his favourite 'things', I just hope that's all it is and this isn't some subtle way to keep Devin from Joey or vice versa. Hopefully Devin can get through this week without incident and hopefully Joey isn't too lonely without Devin following him around and keeping him company :)

I figure by the time this week is over Devin will be practically giddy when he finds out he can see Snake again, let's just hope he lasts that long and I hope he doesn't get sick because being sick and no Joey would just suck. I'm eager for the next update either we get to see how Devin's doing with the no Snake thing or the weeks over and he gets to see him again, either way I'm looking forward to it :)

Even after so many chapters, you manage to surprise me !
(I knew they didn't have the same idea of discipline) ! ^^
Punish Devin like that was good, sweeter maybe... The poor boy really need a break from sexual discipline !

Can't wait for more ! :))

LOVE this update :) I know separating him from Snake is seen as a "punishment" but I can see how Keeran is trying to get Devin more attached to himself and dependent on him! I love it! Sooooo cute <3 Please update soon :)

No Snake??! That's way worse than a beating! So cruel, traxie?!

Hurray for you traxie! Thanks for the new chapter. Keeran is so sweet and snuggly in this chapter. I can hardly stop smiling. Maybe in this week he will learn how to deal with sweet Devin without scaring him half to death. I loved this chapter.

How many are betting that Keeran's gonna get annoyed or something that Devin simply stripped and waited for punishment? I bet it~
Somehow, it feels like Keeran has something more creative planned out for punishment tonight. I hope so... No need for anything taxing that might make Devin really sick.
Pick it up with the studies Devin! You can do it!

Btw traxie,
the formatting for your chapter 31 has gone all haywire. The whole chapter is in a single paragraph chunk. Something happened during the switch from new to old aff perhaps.

Looking forward to the next chap! Please let Keeran be kind! :D

- nekoii

poor kid probably didn't realize keenan wasn't completely serious. they keep forgetting just how messed up he is. this on top of a study head ache. it's been a while but i remember it being exhausting.
well done mastering the site changes btw. yours is one of the few that hasn't succumbed to 'block of text' syndrome.

love reading your story. feel bad for devon ;_;