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I love this story and keep reading it, i hope that it will be updated soon!

Duochan

Hey, just wanted to check in. Just finished re-reading Forgotten. I just love Devin/Raspberry to bits. Just wanna wrap him up in a warm blanket and cuddle (and make him some chocolate chip cookies). Anyway, hope you're doing okay and not stressed out. Can't wait to see what happens next (what with Ronan coming home and the Christmas holidays and Devin thinking that Keeran is planning to torture him for the whole week). I'll try to wait patiently, as I know life can get crazy sometimes, though. I'll just be keeping my fingers crossed that you get some free time, and inspiration, to give us all an update on poor, sweet Devin (and Keeran, Sanke, Ronan, and company, too).

Please please please update soon. I miss Devon, Keenan and Snake...Its such a great story Wow I hate to see it end. Hope to see more soon.

I really want to know what happens with Devon. Can I bride you in any way??A new chapter would make an excellent Mother's Day gift!!

Sweet, sweet writer! You are brilliant! You have captured my mind and heart with Forgotten! I just read chapters one through 34 in a breathless rush, going back to reread again, more slowly! Please write more! I can't stop thinking about these characters who have become so real to me!

Will there be more? (I am waiting eagerly!)

OMG I just found this story and I love, love, love it! I couldn`t stop reading and even cancelled a dentist visit for it (Not that I am really sorry about it...)Please continiue soon!

I've been rereading this story as I wait impatiently for an update. Keeran's cruelty really stands out when you read the whole thing all at once. He seems to be ever so slowly becoming nicer to Devin, but I really like how you show just how little he understands how much he hurts Devin. Occasionally I wonder why Devin is so consistently convinced that pain is coming his way, but Keeran proves that to be true often enough.

I get the sense that Devin's perspective is very slanted, but I really want to find out how much. Devin assumes that he has been transferred from one master to another, but Keeran doesn't seem to consider things the same way -- although he happily treats Devin like a pet or slave when it suits him.

I'm looking forward to seeing Ronan show up. I doubt he's going to buy that Devin is fine, and I'd like to see Keeran honestly taken to task for prostituting Devin to the point of collapse and then using and abusing his body whenever he wants. He hasn't fucked Devin for a while now, but that's really not enough. Joey doesn't really have the status to challenge him properly (although he seems to be gaining ground), and Tobih seems either defeatist or wilfully blind about the extent of the abuse.

Can wait to see what happens

Wait, is Snake actually Keeran's brother? Is that why he lives at the house? Maybe this already came up and I don't remember.