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I'm such a lurker. I've been reading this story forever and am thrilled it's being updated again. I never thought I'd enjoy a story of this nature as much as I do, but you have me hooked and caring so much what happens with Devon, "Master", and "Snake". You have kept Devon in character throughout and that's no easy task. Thank you so much for continuing this story and I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

lunamist

Just wanted to say I was transfixed by this story and can't wait for more.

Thank you so much for the update. At least Snake seems to begin to understand Devin, I am so glad.
I am getting really curious about what Keeran thinks about all this and what his plans really are. But I am not sure what to feel about Ronan being so cold. Either he is trying to stay away from Devin because he is afraid to get the other boy hurt again or there is something else going on..

I can't wait to read the next chapter!

This felt like a peaceful chapter, despite Devin's nerves.
Roran's less cheerful.... I wonder why.

But other than that. I don't know what else to say. (*whispers*Where did the anticipation go?)
Ho hum. Hmmm.

Well there is Christmas to look forward (or NOT look forward) to. But... I wonder. If something else would happen.
I wonder if Devin's just gonna space out when he get's his presents. Or freak out. Heh

We'll see in an update eh? ;)

- nekoii

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Great to see you update this lovely story. I like this chapter doe to Devin had some reaction that's really cute and relax with Keeran's present or touch. Ah!!! I want to read more. T^T Till next time. Always support you.

This story is amazing! When I first started reading it I thought it was another mindless BDSM PWP story where a poor little guy gets abused relentlessly... imagine my horror when a second little guy was introduced into that fucked up place...
And then the dynamics of the story shifted but only slightly and I was sorely peeved when the new master turned out just as bad and was blaming little Devin for Rowan's plight...
And then slowly the story unfolded and the characters developed and i love the way we are seeing everything through Devin's eyes... your writing is powerful! you have an amazing grip on Devin's developing character... I really love this story. I could have kept reading it all night. I kind of wish the chapters just kept on going forever... I don't really feel like leaving the world you have created. It is a little addictive.

Also... is anyone else seeing Rowan and Snake??? I like that pairing a lot! I hope it happens...

Oh! how I love Snake's character!! And I love the friendship between him and Keeren! It is hilarious and adorable.
Poor little Devin! You have really written him perfectly... I just want to snuggle him up and comfort him and make him all better again...
Just the way Keeren is trying to. I love the fact that he is holding himself back...

I wonder if you might eventually be able to explain why he treated Devin the way he did at first. I think I understand why but I just need some confirmation and some reassurance...

I really love you for writing this and continuing it... The time, care, consideration etc that you have put into this story are really obvious and we all appreciate it!!

thank you a thousand times over!!

gosh ,i had forgotten what was going on lol , glad u managed to get another chapter up :D thanks ,was good, cant wait for more hehe

(35) I'm actually surprised that Ronan didn't try and corner Devin somewhere to talk to him. Actually if Devin had stayed in the room that he was supposed to I could see Ronan sneaking in just to talk to him. As for Ronan I think he was surprised by Devin, Keeran may have told him he's fine but he must realize seeing him just how badly off he is if this can be considered better. It'll be interesting to see their conversation because I wonder how Ronan's doing also, he went through some really bad things himself and then he's been sent away from home so maybe things haven't been terribly easy for him either. I imagine he really doesn't have anyone that he could talk to.

Christmas is stressful for most people, I couldn't even begin to imagine how much more it would be for Devin. At least he'll get to wakeup in a safe place, maybe having a good start to the day will make the rest of it a little easier to bare. I'm just wondering at this point if they can at least get through christmas without any major drama, problem is I get the feeling Ronan is feeling something isn't right around there.

Loved seeing a new chapter from you it's been way to long since we had gotten one ^_^ Looking forward to the next update, I hope we won't have to wait too long for it :)

Ohh ! I like this chapter ! It's very sweet >.<
And I also like how you made Devin progress. He's doing better.
I can't wait for the next chapter... Maybe we'll see more Ronan/Devin ?
What are the presents ? I'm very curious ! ;))

YOU UPDATED! I am the happiest person in the world that both stories updated! I can't wait for the next chapter when Devin realizes that the presents aren't the awful things he is expecting. I also hope that he can have nice little chat with Ronan. I'm glad to hear that you don't plan on abandoning Forgotten, so many stories are left unfinished.