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for Forgotten

by traxie

person privers
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The progress Devin has made is makin me fall in love wit this story all over again. The relationships he has wit Snake and Keeran are just adorable now. I feel like I watched him grow up a little lol. Great story. Can't wait for Christmas chapter and PLEASE don't make us wait long! :)
person Narcoleptic
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Devin! Can't wait for your next update to find out what happens.
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no Devin! Just when he and Kereen were making progress! And YAY for an update!

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schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGG that was so mean woman! Omg, I wanna cry, I need to know Devin is ok!!! Dx lol Ooooo what an evil author you are... *huggies you* But I still love you xP
person Anise
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(37) Ronan just sounds so lonely and I wonder if the tough guy image he has at school is just a way to keep people at a distance. I'm guessing he would have a very difficult time trusting people and probably wouldn't have anyone to talk to but I'm glad we finally got to see some Ronan/Devin interaction.^^ I wish they could have met under different circumstances and have been able to just be friends, they'd be so cute together. What both of them are having to deal with is not easy and there's no simple way to fix it.

It's interesting that Devin is usually hyper aware of Keeran at almost all times, yet he actually missed that Keeran had said something to him. I wonder why that was, was he actually enjoying himself enough that he just missed it or was he simply not paying attention. It's all very complicated like an abusive relationship, your terrified of the abuser and wish it would all end but at the same time you can't imagine your life without them, neither are healthy.

It was a nice chapter even if it was a little emotional for both the boys, I am looking forward to the rest of Ronan's visit he seems bound and determined to make friends with Devin :) I hold out hope that maybe he'll manage to make a connection.^^
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I knew it! Ever since you mentioned Christmas I knew Keeran would give Devin a laptop. I'm so proud of myself for figuring it out... LOL should I be? I love this story, you're doing so well with it!
person senti
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters, as always
I like it so far, keep up the good work.
person teresa
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous! Presents! And so much crying! Ronan was fairly restrained in his interrogation. I'm so happy you're writing again. You're fabulous.
person miles
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
We're very lucky to have you writing so much ! :)

I hope to read more of Devin and Ronan together...

person Kinsfang
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the awesome update. I'm glad to hear you've got your writing groove on again. ;D