rate_review Reviews

You keep using the word "faith" instead of "fate".
Otherwise, this is a very disturbing story, but well written.

Stupendous......loved every minute of this read!

omg....love the way you wrote this story =w =b
...and as a side thing...if you are ever bothered lolz.....WOULD LOVE TO SEE THIS STORY WRITTEN IN EITHER SNAKE OR KEERAN'S PERSPECTIVE

it was goods i realy like it

amazing story, i literally read it all in one shot, kept me up until 7am lol i could not stop. I swear you are a master at H/C stories you truly know how to draw out the readers emotions i cried so much reading this out of happiness and sadness. I gotta say it made me happy that keeran and devin didn't sleep together at all after keeran found out he didnt like it, it made everything seem a little more legit and ok in the end. i checked out your profile and i definitely read the 1st story you wrote on here and i loved it too, that was awhile ago, it popped up on a seemingly legit rec list on aarinfantasy. Since i love 2 out of 3 of your stories i figure the one you're still working on probably won't disappoint lol and i'll try writing more reviews, i just usually tend to get caught up in the story forgetting to review at all till the very end.. i noticed the last story isnt complete yet.. i hope you're still working on it ;)

-Emily

[42]

TRAXIE?! WHAT THE HELL?!
(How are you btw, school going good?)

What the hell was that?! Devin was going great! I mean, he was on freaking facebook chatting with Ronan! HE was NORMAL again!
then you ship him off to his nightmares....

Twisted. But seeing as to how there's just one more chapter and the epilogue to go... I'm guessing it can't be that bad.
And thank god he didn't get raped again! but, who is this NEW pet????? Oh dear!!!!!

PHEW. that was short lived. THANKFULLY

and...... DEVIN SHOT HIM!!!! Aweright maaaaaaaann!!! Score!!! Score one for the winz! Just a pity he didn't get a better shot. But I think it good too, coz knowing Devin, he'd probably feel bad or somethign for killing someone.
BUT HE DEFENDED HIMSELF!!! Wohooooo!!!

and it is the end! The End of that baaaastard Grenali gronola whatever his name is.

sweet :D

"Ready, darling?"
Ready. Darling? Darling?! DARLING?!!!!!

...

I'm stuck between wanting to laugh, or gape, or say WHAT THE FU----!?

I think I'll laugh... XD

Keeran saying Darling... the word somehow so foreign on him. XD
Keeran being charming, taking Devin out on a DATE?!
Oh god, this is hysterical. historical. hahahhahahahhahahahhahahhha xD
and Snake being all "Punctual! I like this young man already!"
For a moment I did a backtake, YOUNG man?! Gwaaahahahhaha! XD

What an ending!
It was a slow boil calming down from the hype of the initial chapters, but it was a good decline, not too abrupt, things were explained, characters gradually changing with time, the time frame panned out very well, and it has that nice touch of the final twist, and things all wrapping up very nicely. Smooth finish there Traxie! Very smooth. Good job!

Wow... it's over eh... maaaan. That was really good, awesome awesome awesome.
and to think that this story started out so god damned DARK...
the ending feels very light. Like the pancakes Snake made for Devin that recently fateful morning.

It's a good feeling. All loose ends tied up nicely, and the ending present looks perfect.
I can put this book down, and pat it nicely. (unlike some other stories where the ending comes and you want to fling the bloody thing out the window)
THIS ONE. is good. I'm not flinging this one, it get's to sit on the shelf.

double THUMBS UP to you! Kudos!

All the best in life, school (seriously, good luck with school =x=) and the upcoming Nano!

ttyl~ ;3

- nekoii

Ah, I've been away from this site for a while but was really happy when I got back and saw that you had finished this story! It's great... you manage to write so dark things, but with a silver lining... and I NEED that silver lining or it would be TOO dark... ;) Thank you, a great read!

sorry traxie but the ending made me feel that the story was for kids under 12. but thank u for ending it anyway. im glad that Devin didnt end up with Snake