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for Forgotten

by traxie

person yourdearestwish
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome,Awesome,Awesome! I really hope Devin can finally tell Joey and Keenan what's going on in his head. I love the last two chapters. Thanks for the updates. It was a nice surprise.
person Ciar
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god. You can't just leave it like that, you.. you sadist!
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
great story
person Sjay
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Now taht was the fist time Devin had a normal interaction with something that everyday people do besides cooking... i.e going to the supermarket. Xd i was proud

Why did you leave with such a dreadful cliffhanger. you had better get out another chapter asap. :)
person iriskzk1
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lord, that cliffhanger. I hope the next chapter is put on soon.....like tomorrow.....just a suggestion. :)
person CelticThunderFan
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I seriously am so mad at Keernan right now! What's wrong with Devin did he have another panic attack and faint? Anyhoo, why the heck can't Keernan see that Devin has some serious issues to deal with and he isn't helping the kid! I still am furious at him for treating Devin the way he did when they first rescued Ronan. Why did he hurt Devin like that? Didn't he know the poor kid was a victim too? I hope the can help him before it's too late. Please let Devin have a happy ending!!!!! He deserves it after everything he has been though in his young life.
person lunamist
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohh . . . not nice to end it there! But, as always, you've got me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter and thanks for the update.
person redfox9t
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hate these cliff hangers so much! I was really hoping for a longer chapter, but hopefully this mean that you're going to update soon. I really hope everything is ok with Devin, is Master jealous or something of Snake? I feel like Snake has more of an emotional connection with Devin, while Devin has developed the feelings he has for Master only because of his fear of him. I really hope Devin doesn't have to experience any more hatred acts and just be ok!
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O.o poor raspberry. He has so SERIOUS anxiety. Keeran needs to calm down. he should know by now that the poor thing can't help by panic all the time. great job!
person KC
schedule July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! Poor Devin... he is such a mess still. I hope that Keeran is not really going to whip him.

I also hope you can/will post the next chapter very soon.
Pretty please.

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