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Oh, what a fabulous chapter! How can I possibly wait for the next one? That's the first time Devin's been anywhere in years! Why doesn't doesn't Snake appreciate this? He's the one who has always seen things from Devin's pov. What a cliffhanger ending, traxie. I'm absolutely riveted.

Man i feel like whipping Keeran myself... Doesnt he understand by now that his hotheadedness is obviously scaring Devin like hell... i hope Snake will punch that into his head....cant wait for the next chap!!

NOOO!! How can you leave me and Devin like that?! For the love of everything and anything please update soon!

wahhh how am i supposed to function properly between these updates? oh! my poor little Devin! That chapter was so! good! Him going out to the grocery store was such a big deal! and then when keeren walked in on him and snake and heard him say he was scared! my heart was racing! lol that is how pathetic i am... seriously though, why does keeran have the whip in his hand? why is he doing that again? i don't think he is about to whip him but why scare little devon like that? oh my poor little devin! snake buying him a candy bar was so cute! i love snake!! i love this story! I am literally gushing over this chapter update!! I love you for writing this!!

I think, devin is over-reacting? But, I think Keeran is jealous of Snake and Devin closeness.

Oh my goodness! What just happened? I hope Devin is okay. By the way, I love how quickly you are updating! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh my gosh! Did Devin just have a heart attack??????!!!!! Oh, my gosh!!!! Nooooooo

I hate you. No really, I.HATE.YOU. I stalked this site 2 or three time a day and then, you post this chapter with this horrible cliffangher! You're a sadist! But hey, I suppose it make me a masochist, because i always come back to your story, which is one of my favorite, ever. So keep going and I hope the next chapter will come quickly, without a punisment for poor Devin. He needs love too much and they came so far, he and Keeran!

Ok, I don't remember this but did Keeran have Gennarelli killed or is the bastard still alive? If he's dead, I hope that Keeran lets Devin know because I keep thinking that the poor kid is afraid he will be sent back to him. I think Keeran is going to feel really guilty after this chapter and would hate to have to explain to the doctor what happened. By the way, has the doctor or anyone ever tried to get Devin to open up about Gennarelli and help him with his fears?

Ahhhhhh that is such an evil cliffy