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for Forgotten

by traxie

person Nine
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i hate it when i reach the end of the chapter. I dread coming to it. i hate running out of words to read. and you always leave us on cliffhangers as far as i am concerned but i forgive you because you write us these chapters and i love you for your efforts. i feel that if keeren is waiting for devin to get normal before he pursues their relationship again, he is going to have to wait years. and i don't mind that because it means years of chapter updates ahead of me...
maybe keeren should be getting therapy for his obvious personality disorder as well??
but i like the fact that they are both damaged.
i just don't know how the balance of power in their relationship will ever be equal. Devin is so screwed up, the poor dear :)
thank you so much Traxie
person dut
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Like the progress... but man, I wanna strangle Ronan... I wish Keeran would realise that Devin is getting more paranoid thinking that he isnt wanted... Gosh... Thanks for the update!! It made my day
person miles
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally Keeran realised ! Better late than never ! ^^
Ronan is not a fool... I can't wait to know what's going to happen that night !
And thanks for the fast update... :))
person kylee123
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi Traxie. The story is going beautifully. Poor Keeran is in a self imposed doghouse. I am glad that Devin is having a good time. I felt so sorry for him when he had the panic attack. You would think that Keeran would know better than to threaten the poor boy with violence. This truly is a story of beauty and the beast. I actually really like these chapters with Ronan because we get to see how a normal boy Devin's age should behave. Sometimes I forget that Devin is a teenager as well. Hugs and kisses to Devin and Snake and Keeran too.
person dazedandconfused
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, it was so sweet, and for the first time since we have been introduced to Devin he acted almost normal. I wonder what Ronan is up too, can't wait to find out but just hope he and Devin don't find themselves in trouble after Devin is doing so well. I kind of felt sad for Keeran, LOL. I love Snake!
person yourdearestwish
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally some progress! Way to go Devin. Well written Traxie. Thanks for the update. Confetti .,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
person teresa
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you! That was wooonderful. Hot chocolate and a snowman! I'm so happy for Devin he gets to stay with Snake for now.
person kellankyle
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I'm very new to this site and have read a few stories, but none that have gripped me quite like this one. In fact I have resisted registering, but had no choice if I wanted to comment. I cannot wait for your next update. I have high hopes for Devin but because he is so screwed up I don't he can even have a HEA. Maybe he can have a "happy right now"? I love how evident it is that Joey has come to care for Devin. Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I hope you finish soon. Thanks!
person Tay
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pleas update soon
person Ali-chan
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that was REALLY mean! I reread the last few lines about 4 times before I was able to convince myself that that was it for now. Shucks! please more!!