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At last... Devin wants to be himself! I nearly stopped breathing when you mentioned 'the end' I can't deal with that at the moment. This story has such a hold on me I check for updates regularly. Anyhow, after reading the last chapter and being so angry with Keerans treatment to Devin I realised he had never talked to Devin about his past, he just assumed he knew what and who he was. I'm glad Ronan actually cares enough to ask questions even if it's upsetting to both of them and I would really like Keeran to do the same so he would an insight into Devins mindset and his anxiety. Devin in this update seems a little stronger, until Keeran turned up that is, Ronan is definetely good for him and teaching him to use facebook is genius!
So on one hand I'm sad you're thinking of the ending but then again it means we'll see a Devin progress into a regular teenager after a horrific time.

Thanks so very much for the update. Poor Devin. I'm glad he's finally figuring out that he wants to be free. And that scene with he and Ronan was so sad and yet so very needed. Great work as always and I'm both looking forwards to and dreading the ending (as I get so excited when you've updated this story).

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love angst, but Im starting to wonder if this story will ever get a bit more positive. very depressive tone.

I think things are really starting to look up for Devin. Why, he's even got a FB account thanks to Ronan and Snake was awesome in this chapter too. I think Keernan needs counseling, LOL. It's nice to see that Devin starting to believe in himself as a person again and not a slave or pet. He still has some small issues but is definitely getting better. I will be sad to see his story end but hope he is happy and finds peace.

Omgggggg. I like this path you're taking, but it will break my heart if he ends up with Keeran. Just the scenes with Ronan make Devin seem so much younger, and it ugh.. I don't want him to end up with anyone. I just want him to heal!



I'm so invested in Devin, which goes to show how well you've written this story!

Yeah... a new chapter. I was a little nervous about how Devin would deal with Ronan and his need to talk. But it seems as if Ronan maybe has not had anyone to really talk to about what happened to him. But I think that it was good to have someone in the household realize that Devin was Master Grenaldi's pet for years. Ronan's horror at discovering this was the best. I think he believes what happened to him was bad, but I think he may have gotten a glimpse that things could have been much, much worse for him if he did not have a caring uncle to fight to get him back. Makes me wonder how Master Grenaldi got his hands on Ronan in the first place. That has been something that has always bugged me, but seeing as how this is all in Devin's POV I doubt he would ask or anyone would just tell him.

I am glad that Devin seems to be healing enough to realize that he wants to be something other that an "owned object". I think that is real progress as he has been so brainwashed/trained to think of himself as a owned pet and not a person. I think it is cute the way Devin is "crushing" on Keeran, even if he is still scared of screwing up/ being bad/ making Keeran angry. It is a big step for Devin to acknowledge that he wants Keeran, not as a master, but rather as a person.

I am hopeing that Keeran can relax a little bit around Devin, so that Devin might start to actually talk to him.

Looking forward to more chapters as you get them done and posted.

Poor sweet Devin! It is too bad that Ronan is leaving because that is the longest conversation Devin has ever had. It would do him good to have a friend to talk to. I hope he and Keeran will be able to meet each other halfway at some point. I miss them sleeping together and they have only been apart a few days.

(39) Thank goodness it was just a panic attack, although it did bring about an interesting development with how they're going to do things. Maybe not being around each other constantly will give them the space to make real progress and change, let's hope Keeran can allow Devin that space. And while I think this is a good thing for Devin he still has got to be unsure about what he feels about all this. At least Joey is so good at being able to read Devin and cut off the doubts before they get out of hand. He's also pretty good at saying things in a way that Devin will understand and respond to which is good :)

I loved this chapter it actually felt like for the first time they are starting to move forward.^^ You have hope that things will get better for Devin and he may make some real improvement, at the very least he won't constantly be afraid. Plus I really liked Ronan's appearance, I love the energy he brings :) Although like a typical teenager he's up to mischief and sneaking out, I wonder what he's got in mind. I can't wait for the next chapter to see, part of me thinks he just needs someone to talk to that understands. But I look forward to finding out ^_^

Last thing, I liked how after just one afternoon outside and even Devin could see an improvement in himself, he already seems more at ease, like a weight has been lifted. I hope it continues, I'm really looking forward to the next update to see where they go next :)

This is so sad omg I don't know what to do with myself...
On one hand Devin is getting better but on the other Keeran needs to stay away from him for that to happen :(

Thanks for the new chapter ,I felt sad for Keeran , i want Devin to trust him :(
it's strange but i don't like Snake at all.I am addicted to this story! wish you never finish it!but hope to see an update again soon