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for Forgotten

by traxie

schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you are updating regularly! (even if I can not find the time read and review as regularly as I would like)

I am happy to read that Devin is finally realising that he is his own person. I am looking forward to your next update and to find out how this story will end. Though I am sad that Ronan is leaving again, maybe he will be back?

Thanks again.
person Anise
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
(40) I feel sorry for Ronan, he's just as trapped as Devin having to live at his uncle's whim, which isn't a good thing considering how irrational he can be. Keeran needs to calm down if he were more objective he might see that sending him away isn't what Ronan needs. He must be so heartbroken being away from home.

But I think being around Devin actually did Ronan good, he's got no one else to talk to and Devin can sympathise with what he's gone through. I have to wonder if Devin has ever talked that openly or honestly before, when he isn't in constant fear he's actually a rather insightful kid. I think that conversation did both Devin and Ronan a world of good, Keenan may not like it but to be honest I care less and less about what he thinks, especially in relation to Devin.

And we can't have a chapter like this without mentioning Snake, yet again I love the way he handles things :) He wakes up in the middle of the night to find Ronan has snuck into Devin's room and he just goes with it and gets the spare mattress.^^ He has a very straightforward way of dealing with any situation without losing his cool, considering how crazy Keeran and his life can get, remaining calm is probably the only way to do things ^_^

I've really enjoyed these last couple of chapters and I can't wait for the next one, it's always interesting when Tobih appears. I would think he'll be happy to hear that Devin and Ronan got to spend sometime together just being teenagers, I think it's what he's wanted all along. Can't wait to see the next chapter :)
person Rosei
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go Teeta!

Love the angst! Keeren's got a lot of angst
going on himself these days!

Thanks!
R
person dut
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gosh Keeran.. Can't he be more gentle? hahaha unbelievable... I hope things will progress for the better. Devin sounds like hes going to go berserk..
person teresa
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, hugs for Devin! Thank you for updating: it's exciting to hear you have a dat for finishing the story. I've been following it for so long it feels like part of my life I'll miss when it's gone.
person fairy4u
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Also, love, love love this update. Devin opening up to Ronan about his past, and his sexuallity is a good sign that he started to trust the people around him...hopefully he can do the same to Keeran. More please????

person miles
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! You spoiled us ! Thank you for the fast update ! :))
Poor Devin know nothing about being a teen... T.T
And it's going to be very difficult to be 'normal'...

Update soon, pleaseeeee
person GreenEliza
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The last two lines of that chapter just made my day! I really really really hope Devon manages leave his past behind and start down a new path! I hope he finds a way to flourish through the healthy relationships he's forming and drop the bad ones! Great stuff!
person Tay
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really luv this story.
person clovermax
schedule August 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40 - is so powerful. He finally arrives at a point where he wants to be someone not a pet. How many years was he kept?