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for Forgotten

by traxie

person yourdearestwish
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Devin found some courage. I like the new direction the story is taking. You rock! Good Luck at school. Kudos, Crystal
person Ci
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy Devin is getting better!! I love how Snake is so helpful and caring towards him; a good uncle!
Good luck in school Traxie!!
person anon
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! So glad that you updated. Love the fact that Joey and Devin are now "family" - very sweet! :) I do hope that Devin and Keeran end up together, eventually - I think that once Devin heals a bit (and Keeran works on his possessive anger issues!) they'd be quite happy together. Not to mention the sex between them is hot as hell, lol! ;D

Can't wait for the next update!!! :D
person alex
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad that you've updated!
person Fairy4u
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM

Thank you for the update and good luck on everything. I am so proud of Devin! Even though Keeran is an @ss, I still wants them together.
person midnightsscream
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awh. Snake knows just how to handle Devin. I think this was a huge breakthrough for Devin. I'm still quite surprised that he's making such an effort, but it's wonderful. can't wait to read what happens next!
person Ci
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good!! I kept tearing up all throughout the chapters for poor Devin. ;___;
Such a good story!! Thank you for writing it! I look forward to the rest!
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have been absent from reading on the site for a long time, but I just couldn't help myself with this one. I am really interested to see where this story eventually goes, its had some twists and turns along the way that I don't fully understand the purpose of yet, but I am sure you have your reasons! Can't wait for an update!
person kc
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I have been checking for a new chapter... been a little down to not find one. I think you spoiled me by a streak of postings close together.

Last time I reviewed this chapter I use the wrong name for Master G. I knew it was wrong at the time but could not think of anything else.

I hope that everything is well with you and you are just busy.
person Nine
schedule August 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
words fail me. i am so overwrought from this chapter... it was wonderful in a thousand ways... i just... i just think that i love you for writing this... there are tears in my eyes. i love these characters... and seeing them progress is so lovely. there was so much answered and established in this chapter. one of the best updates ever. i love you!!!