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I love your story. Its written so well and keeps me on my toes. I started reading it in march and and found it again. please keep writing, i want to know what happens next.

oh dear panic attack.

the rollercoaster that Devin is going through is making me nauseous.

goodness, how does he stomach anything. and Keeran is no help! What's his problem goodness. The poor boy barely had a proper rest during the holidays. It was all terror with the shopping trip and whip, then happiness with the snowman. then anxiety again with the sleepover. and then this breakfast!
GIVE THE POOR KID A BREAK KEERAN! jeeeezus! He's behaving like an emotionally compromised FOOL. *shakes Keeran*

and I really really really don't have a good feeling about the whole Facebook thing. I mean. Hello. it's FACEBOOK!
someone is going to find Devin... then it will all go to hell.

We'll see.

Oh my god.

HE GREW A BACKBONE! well, just A bone. but, still... I SEE A SPINE DEVELOPING! OMG! Devin!
:D :D :D :D
DEVIN! This is FANTASTIC NEWS! this is a GREAT development!
It's like he woke up one day after that nap and snap! It's a new bone installment! A SPINE bone!

Let more of them grow! He needs full inner skeletal support!
Go Devin go! you can do it! grow up! :D

and yes Keeran take your own advice and stay away please, you are like arthritis.

Good one! I'm loving the direction! More spine building chapters please if you can :D

Pleaseeee, the next chapter... :)

after walking away at Chapter 22, I came back and read again.Devin still hated kiran?! it doesnt matter how many people want Devin and Snake together . do you really want to pair Devin with Snake after sleeping so many times with Kiran?! This story could actually have been very good if you made Keeran a little less easy to hate.i like your writing stlye but i dont know Where this story going.

I was hoping to find you posted a new chapter. Since you did not, so I re-read some of the last chapters. Hope your life is going well and will wait for you to post a new chapter. I can't wait to see more of Devin's growth and healing.

I keep thinking what would it be like if you wrote something from either Snake's or Keerran's viewpoint. Not redoing of every chapter from their viewpoint, but maybe a one or two chapter piece of their thoughts/reflections on some of the interactions or views on Devin. If you do ever do tackle something like that... I think it would be best as a separate posting.

I love this story! Please...please continue writing it and give your fans a new installment ( or a few ;) ). It is the best story you have written and I need to see how it is going to end!

wild story, I'd like to know of new postings.

I recently saw FORGOTTEN on GoodReads with a 5 star rating so I thought I would give it a try. What an awesome experience...for the last day 1/2 all I have done between the usual daily responsibilities is read this story. I am new to reading Adult Slash Fanfic so I am disappointed to reach chapter 41 and not have reached an ending. That wasn't the last chapter, right? I mean there needs to a resolution between Devon and Keeran....and hopefully some hint of a HEA! Now I am left hanging and I can't stand that ~ please update soon! You have some really loyal fans since it looks like FORGOTTEN was started ~ 2008. I am now one too. I am hooked! PLEASE add me to your mailing list so I know about the final chapters being released.