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for Believer

by artpersonak

person maccam
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh i wish there were more of this story!!! please update soon. I want to know whats going to happen next!!
person Bee
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so annoyed, I just reviewed and it didn't put it up so now I have to remember what I wrote! lol. Ok I am so excited about this story because I always wanted to read about a story on aliens coming to our planet to procreate with our women because I thought it would be a really interesting an idea and I won't presume that's what you are doing but it seems like Rezvan's mission is to see if they can procreate with women of this planet and have a relationship with them. So I am super excited to find out what his mission is. I love your characters, they are always so different and interesting. I can't wait until the next chapter! I mean what is going to happen next? Will she wake up in her bed? What were those leeches, a part of his arms? Was he trying to bring her to the door because he was waiting for her in her room. God I am dying to know! lol. Please update soon! Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rammina
schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU MEANIE! I wanted to know what happened next!
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing!
person Bee
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More more more. What he is on eath? Is he there to mate with a human being? To see if there species can mix? This is so interesting. Please update soon!
person YES!
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Motivation! I've read it like 25 times. I love that it now has a story! Maybe you could expand Mein too. But work on this! And your mafia story!! XD
person maccam
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far, can't wait for more.