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I love the relationship that you write between Revaz and Victoria. It's very interesting. Revaz is so interesting to read, I love that he comes from a species that mates for life and doesn't have murder or rape but what makes it all the more interesting is why he is here on Earth (though I have my suspicions) and his fascination of Victoria. “Nor will I ever inflict any harm upon you, unless you force me to.” I also thought that line was so interesting and I couldn't tell if you were foreshadowing but on one hand he won't force her to do anything but then he says unless you force me too. I like that he is patient with her but even he has his limits.
Love this story! Update soon!

Awww a date how cute. :)

That was quiet good, interesting in fact.

I hate her bad attitude at everything, she is not one of my favorite characters at all. But maybe Ravez can help her change, it's a good story so far. Please update again soon!

wow, i am honestly shocked at how much i like this story. i hope you continue with it! if it tells you anything i have never reviewed a story in this section before. i am impressed, hooked, and would love to read more!

Love this story. It is so intriguing. “I'm sorry to hear that.” Victoria tensed, sensing some sort of discomfort in his voice. “Is that why you are hear? To study our medicine?” No Victoria, he is here to mate with you! lol. Actually I am really interested to know why he is there. I love how Victoria is so whiny, young, and innocent and the alien is this stern calm being.
Post soon my dear!!

Aw cliffhangers how I love them!!! I'm glad that ur at least updating this great story! can't wait to read more!!

A cliffhanger! That's so cruell! Please update soon, I really like your story!

Wow, I'm really liking this! I tend to lean more towards slash just because I find there's so little het fiction out there that catches my interest but yours definitely did. I love the interaction bet the main characters; one is extremely calm and intelligent and at the same time completely clueless while the other is extremely emotional and though she's really smart she doesn't have the 'cool collected' front. Oh and the ending of this last chapter was just great; I can't wait to see what trick our dear little alien pulled off with his switch thingy on his wrist :p I hope you get to update soon, because I honestly can't wait for more!!

DO WE HAVE TO WAIT ANOTHER YEAR FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!???? WHY DON'T YOU UPDATE >.<