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hey, well... i like it now, the 6th & 7th chap. in the beginning i didnt like your female character at all. shes bratty and a bit snotty...
i like the whole idea to it, the aliens, their world, the fertility problem, tentacles...lol
id like to see more

Wow that was intense! I love the storyline you weaved. So their population is dwindling and they need spouses, interesting. I like it! lol. I am assuming that Victoria and Andrea are the only humans there so I guess they want to know if they can procreate. I am really interested to see how Victoria will fair there and if she will let Revaz have an emotional break down. This was my favorite line: “I'm certain you will enjoy living there. At least for the time being. It is big enough for you to hide from me...” sooooo funny. So Revaz must have a pretty high standing in their society?? Please update soon! Love this story!

I just want to cry after reading this chapter :(
I understand she's mad but i feel bad for him. can't wait to read more!!! update soon.

Poor Revaz, sounds like he really wants to love and be loved in return by Victoria. Can't say I blame her for her resistance.

Update soon. :D

I love your story! I hope you're going to update it soon, I can't wait to know what Revaz did to Victoria! (: Keep going, I love how you writing.

Whoa what the heck happened?!? I thought he wanted to mate with her but now I am totally thrown off with this substance he put into her mouth and body. I can't wait until the next chapter! I am dying to find out what happens next. LOVE THIS STORY!

At last! Another chapter has arrived! Hm... what could all of this possibly mean for victoria? I can't wait to find out. Cliff-hangers make stories, I know, but too many can make people frustrated. You aren't there yet, but watch out. It sneaks up on you. ^.^"

Okay, now I really must know what is next. :D

I have to say, I'm pretty interested to see where this leads. It's not every day you see someone with decent grammar on this site and evel less often does a fanfiction catch my attention for reasons other than... Er-hem... Recreational use. I find myself surprised, eargerly checking back every day to see if a new chapter will be posted. I haven't been this excited since I discovered Sinners, a fanfiction by Slash_Firestorm. I can tell that you worked hard on this fic so far, and felt that you deserved to be complimented for your efforts. Brilliant work.

Wow! They kissed and are getting closer. What does he really want on earth??