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May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know she is on another planet, But shit all Victoira does is whine! Move on deal with what you have..
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
X.x please tell me you are going to make chapter 9, I just read it all and now im curious to know whats going to happen next. 10/10 by the way, very awesome story.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Victoria having to deal with a prude of a mother. Nice chapter by the way very sweet those two finally getting together.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, as always! Have to say that's not exactly how I expected Revaz to react... But it was great, I couldn't wait to see what would make her change her mind (at least, I hoped she would). Can't wait for the next chapter!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
keep it up!
keep it up!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you updated. I thought I was going to be happy about them making love, but I still feel so bad for him and her. they both have so much to learn about each other. I can't wait to read more! please update soon!
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great job!
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's been a while since I last checked on AFF
and goodness! I love your story! Oh please do
update on this one. I totally fell in love with
your story. More power! :D
and goodness! I love your story! Oh please do
update on this one. I totally fell in love with
your story. More power! :D
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, please keep going! (: I hadn't thought that this would be his mission. O: I hope you update soon, I'm constantly imagining what the story will be like. x3
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loving where this is going! very interesting and i already love andrea!