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Yay Your updating..
Can't wait to see what happens next.

p.s Chanting (Freaks of Nature.)(I loooove that one too.)

Oh God, please tell me you are going on with that story. I have to go to work in 5 hours but I simply couldn't stop reading your story and now I even write an review instead of going to bed. Your story was so fascinating! Please go on!!!!

First off just let me say I love your writing and I love the plots of your stories. I think there well developed and you make them believable. A question I had about them was why are your female characters, or maybe I should say your female protagonist always so hesitant. I mean I understand in your darker themed stories. But in this one I feel like Revaz is a nice guy . . . she should give him a bit of a break. I know he's kidnapped her . . . but I feel like she's to hard on him. I enjoyed the scene in chapter 11 or 12 where she finally forgives him in his office. But the hesitance is something I'm always wondering about.

I hope you will give Andrea and Victoria the opportunity to get revenge on all of the aliens. creatures who treat others that badly should never win in the end! poor victoria and andrea, please give them a happy ending!

Ah, so she finally gets to remove the Forrest Gump-esque braces around her emotions and finally run free as a more mature individual. I must say this chapter was immensely refreshing, and, oddly enough, it wasn't simply because Victoria took an emotional dose of fiber and acknowledged and admitted her feelings. Overall, this chapter is where I can sense things are starting to really push forward and develop; mainly because your main character is finally overcoming her self-imposed conflict, but also because I feel you're starting to let us (the readers) in more.

Again, thank you.


Emilie

OMG! That was sooo good! That was everything a good chapter should be just fantastic! I got chills near the end that's how good it was =) can't wait for the next chapter!

wow that was a wonderful chapter.I fear for her now more than ever!!!

Thanks for the update I love this story so much!!!!!

Great update! I love how Victoria is finally accepting Revas. Although I'm curious as to why Thamar as nearby. Can't wait for the next chapter so see what happens next! Please update soon! :)

I was reading this a while back before you left it to hang... I'm hoping it doesn't get left hanging again! Its VERY good and I cant wait to see what happens next