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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
...That was absolutely exquisite! It's been awhile since I've read such kickass ficlet! XD OMFG, I'm definetly gonna be reading this over and over again! I know it's probably annoying when reviewers constantly put 'update soon, update soon', but I really do hope you update soon! XD Thankies for writing such an awesome ficcy!
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's Emilie again.
It's been a while since I have been able to review, but have since read through this whole story several times. It's an incredibly compelling story. As much as Victoria drives me crazy, and I want to bash Revaz over the head for not being able to respond to her in a way that will resolve the conflict rather than pour salt on the wound, I want to find out if their story will turn out all right in the end. Plus, it is so far removed from most of the tasteless "alien abduction" stories that are little more than smut without plot. You have woven a truly unique and amazing tale that, while you give us a few *wonderfully* written intimate moments, is never over-the-top smutty. Victoria and Revaz's joinings are important plot and character development-driving forces without which the story would not have as much depth.
I thank you for this gift. And I hope there are many more chapters in the works to be published soon!
Sincerely,
Emilie
It's been a while since I have been able to review, but have since read through this whole story several times. It's an incredibly compelling story. As much as Victoria drives me crazy, and I want to bash Revaz over the head for not being able to respond to her in a way that will resolve the conflict rather than pour salt on the wound, I want to find out if their story will turn out all right in the end. Plus, it is so far removed from most of the tasteless "alien abduction" stories that are little more than smut without plot. You have woven a truly unique and amazing tale that, while you give us a few *wonderfully* written intimate moments, is never over-the-top smutty. Victoria and Revaz's joinings are important plot and character development-driving forces without which the story would not have as much depth.
I thank you for this gift. And I hope there are many more chapters in the works to be published soon!
Sincerely,
Emilie
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March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait! I truely enjoyed this story. Usually, I feel disgusted at tenta- things . When I was young, That stuff popped up on my computer. It was my brother's . At that time, I had no idea how to make a baby and it was my first experience about graphic adult thing. It was really tough, huh? Because o that, I don't like t~things at all. But Somehow I like your story ( Maybe It's because It is novel. not visible. ) I liked Revaz was calm. the Story was very fun especially alien things . this story is my favorite. But I like all of your stories. Actually, I liked the way you wrote about stories. I don't like stuff like M/M, F/F,moresome. But I don't mind abuse, violence. It seemed like your and my taste in stories are alike. I'm happy about that~! Anyway, Please keep going! ( I'm waiting for A Kiss Of Frost's new chapter, too)
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February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, just brilliant. I'm really hoping for a happy ending.
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AAAh i have been waiting forever to read the next chapter of this story. Pretty please with cherries and sugar on top update soon i keep rereading this last chapter and the suspense is killing me. I am dying to know how revaz reacted to her being gone! at this point i had to review and ask you from the bottom of my heart for the next chapter ;] i dont ever review on this website.
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I really enjoy this story. I've been reading it for a while from my phone and I finally got around to reviewing on my computer. It's really unique and I enjoy that the main character isn't a perfect Mary Sue and has flaws but still makes you want to support her all the way. I despise how she gets treated so badly just for being from Earth, seems like they're insulting me too...but then I remember that this is a story haha!!
I realllyyyy loved this chapter in particular. She finally got a backbone and did something instead of just complaining. And to be honest, her complaints make sense. Revaz shouldn't just ignore her now that's he's busy. I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens!! I hope you'll write a chapter from Revaz point of view on these events, just because it'd be interesting to see how this affected him. Since his bond is more complete than hers, it seems like this would affect him a lot more than it did Victoria and I'm wondering if he also passed out when she did.
Update when you can!!
I realllyyyy loved this chapter in particular. She finally got a backbone and did something instead of just complaining. And to be honest, her complaints make sense. Revaz shouldn't just ignore her now that's he's busy. I absolutely cannot wait to see what happens!! I hope you'll write a chapter from Revaz point of view on these events, just because it'd be interesting to see how this affected him. Since his bond is more complete than hers, it seems like this would affect him a lot more than it did Victoria and I'm wondering if he also passed out when she did.
Update when you can!!
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Keep updating!
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
love the twist!
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January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was really, really good. I've been reading it none stop since I found it yesterday. Looks to be close to the end and I'm wondering where it will end up. I really hope you write more soon!
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope that you update soon. Like REALLY SOON!
lol.
I really do enjoy this story and i have been looking forward to the next chapter in such a long time.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. For what will happen now that she is home? Is Revaz on his way to her? Or will she have a change of heart and go back herself?
Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! ^_^
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I really do enjoy this story and i have been looking forward to the next chapter in such a long time.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. For what will happen now that she is home? Is Revaz on his way to her? Or will she have a change of heart and go back herself?
Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! ^_^