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for Why do angels have wings?

by AxiaDrake

person DravenxLovecraft
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intresting piece of work you have here. It's nicely layed out and seems to be having a good plot. I hope to see more in the near future.
person Writing On The Wall
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should so up-to-date this story everyone loves it!!!!
person Angel Faced Bweby
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey gurl I like this story keep posting
person Brian's Baby Gurl
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is Angel's sister we read it at the same time I like it
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aure. What a horrible mother. I can't see her ever being ready for an angel. Love the dreamscape idea. Very creative, and nice that that poor Aure has some access to a normal parent child relationship/love.

Enjoyed chapter 2 a lot. looking forward to the next chapter. thanks for sharing.
person Ash
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story, this is my first time reading an original slash story, and I know I love this one. I hope you write more I'm just dying to see who he'll end up with.
person kiix
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, intriguing but I'm a little confused. Aure is 21? He's hiding in a closet from his mother's lovers or is that from earlier in his life? And...and an angel's soulmate is a demon? Is it that girl the demon, or will the assumed hotness who has yet to make an appearance the demon? Well, anyways I think you need to write more. Like now. No pressure, eh? More please.

Kiix
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start to this story. Looks very promising can't wait for more. but i do have a few questions. if his father new that his soulmate was a guy why is he betrothed to a girl? it may just be me that i missed something. well i will go back and read it again just in case.

Thanks for sharing
person dopegirlmagik
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(I'm to lazy to log in)

I'm feeling this story, haven't read anything up here that sparked my intrest in a long time but your story did. I can't wait to see what happens. I'm hanging off the edge of my seat. Anyways good luck with the story I'll be waiting for more!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good