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Thanks for the new chapter. You are doing a good job of setting up Nathan and Claire to do battle with each other. They really have been living parallel lives. Nathan is the abuser and Claire has endured the same experiences as Nathan's sister. Perhaps Claire has come out a little stronger except for the drug addiction. Frank is such a tattletale for spilling Nathan's secret. I wonder how Claire would react if she knew that Nathan had his own supply of Percocet at his house. The story is going great and I can't wait to see what you do with these two characters.

Wow. This is a very interesting story. I just had to check it out. It is very good so far. Please keep going at it.

I am officially addicted to this story. I love Nathan in all of his evilness. He certainly is a tortured soul. I also love Claire. I am glad that she is not too innocent or perfect. That makes them a good match. I am eager to see who will end up winning this battle. Is Nathan still seeing Marnie? I thought he had paid her off in chapter 2. I guess the fifteen grand was enough to make her change her mind about seeing him again. The story is very well written and I am so glad that I found it. I am looking forward to reading more.

I forgot all about this story. Can't wait to read more of it.

Wow very powerful!!!

Already read the first 2 chaps, but keep up.

good so far, hope you write more