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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please PLEASE update and continue on with this story! I would say do it fast & keep them coming but I wouldn't want you to rush! This story certainly is addicting so please dont stop, keep up the great work, & I look forward to more.
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November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
el es tan enfermo y no puede esperar que la manda a atacar para poder salvarla, espero que el se enamore realmente de ella y pueda terminar bien, muy buen capitulo, espero muy pronto nuvas actualizaciones, ana maria
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Welcome Back? Didn't think you would pick this up again but, very happy you did! Honestly, I was more interested in Marjorie and Nathan. I loved the prologue and is looking forward to how Claire is going to take Marjorie's spot in Nathan's life.
Keep up with the updates!
Keep up with the updates!
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November 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy to see a new chapter of this story. It has been quite a while. I am glad that you are still working on it.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
por favor hacer mas capitulos es una historia muy interesante, ana maria
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy buena historia, lindisimos y oscuros personajes, espero muy pronta actualizacion, ana maria
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1.
Holy god. That was so sad... god... it almost made me cry! This is an enthralling beginning. I can't wait to read more. You've got a wonderful gift. The flow of your words and the imagery you portray is magnificent. Incredible job.
Sammie
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1.
Sorry, my last review was for the prologue. Wow. Nathan is certainly a twisted crazy, isn't he? That whole thing with Marnie was kind of sad. There're definitely a few screws really loose in there. This is really deep. Very intense. So good.
Sorry, my last review was for the prologue. Wow. Nathan is certainly a twisted crazy, isn't he? That whole thing with Marnie was kind of sad. There're definitely a few screws really loose in there. This is really deep. Very intense. So good.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3.
God. The way you get into his head and just... all the grief, the twisted thoughts, the rage... you're amazing with emotions! Absolutely wonderful! This is so sad. Thirteen-years-old. God. She was just a baby. A little girl. He was continually raping a child.
*shudders* Your main character is sick.
I love it. You've got a true gift. You're incredible. This story is amazing.
God. The way you get into his head and just... all the grief, the twisted thoughts, the rage... you're amazing with emotions! Absolutely wonderful! This is so sad. Thirteen-years-old. God. She was just a baby. A little girl. He was continually raping a child.
*shudders* Your main character is sick.
I love it. You've got a true gift. You're incredible. This story is amazing.
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December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please post more asap!!!