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for My Captain, oh Captain!

by dameange

person Leeana69
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kukukuku. *obnoxious hand over the mouth laugh*

Twas amazing. *dances, throwing handfulls of flowers at the two men still on the bed* Ignore me, keep going, keep going.

*pulls out a camera* Hope you don't mind that I'm using this, I'll give you a few copies. XDDDDD

schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First review? Can't believe it. This story was adorable and sweet, the characterizations for the main characters were really good, and the dialogue great. Although the characterizations for the ex-wife were a little cliche (zomg!evil), it was okay for the brevity of the story. Thanks for writing!

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