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for Bela the Nymphomaniac Vampire Slayer

by erisah

schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Modern fiction, one of my fave genres. And this is a classic example of of the kind of witty, nicely flowing storylines and cynical chacater developments I like to read. The character's personality is consistently written and I love her sardonic dry wit. The only things I'd say you need to be careful of is the occasional spelling mistake and rare instances where a sentence would make more sense if worded slightly differently. All in all, I'm impressed with this and I'll be watching for future developments.
person Lain872
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the banter in this fic. you're quite funny! can't wait for moreeeee

p.s.
i love all the sneaky shots against stephanie meyer. she sucks.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats awesome! I love the attitude Bella has. And you take such care to describe in detail the characters and backgrounds, it is almost as if it is happening right there in front of you. Bravo! I also love the story's premise. Nymphomaniac Vampire Hunter. I wonder if she will meet a Satyr in the "business" as well. ;) Again, awesome story and I sincerely hope that you continue it!