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for Bela the Nymphomaniac Vampire Slayer

by erisah

person jackpot7374
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is that the end? Great story and for a Nymphomaniac Vampire story...I was thinking more sex! LOL. Either way, I enjoyed it if it's truly over.
person jackpot7374
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi Marie,

Is there more coming? waiting for new post for some ass kicking...and licking to begin. lol

JP
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gotta love those inner conversations. you know you're not crazy when you don't talk to the inner voices out loud.
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woot! MOAR! Need MOAR!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
whee! an update! *lurves the author and sends cookies*
schedule August 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn WOW! This is a great piece of fucking literature. I was practically ROFL at the shit Bela faced, and yet the mystery behind the characters and their fucked up lives. This story has captivated me and I can't wait for more! Please update soon : ) The suspense of finding out what the hell is happening in the end of the 9th chapter is huge.
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lets call the next chapter "Why Bela hates cliff-hangers"
I'm going to go nuts waiting for the next part.
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More? Please? I really wanna see what comes next :)
person cbarkins
schedule April 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story seriously rocks my socks, it really does, but the latter part of this chapter, I didn't quite grasp what Bela was referring to with Rutley and the little analogy she was saying about the former mind reader she encountered, but overall good chapter. And that's putting it mildly. Her cynicism is so cute and funny. But when he asked her if she were internally monologuing, I just thought that was too funny, then he asked again! I was dying laughing, that's highlarious!
schedule February 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My FAVORITE line is "Fucking Christ on a bicycle. Bitch did not just attempt to condescend then tough talk me." I almost died laughing. I love the biting sarcasm (no pun intended).