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by luna65

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schedule November 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WowohwowohWOWWWWWW! You write with total poetry; words deliously devourable, wow, your writing is GOOD!!! Ok, am settling down now, lol. Amazing, your ability to show your readers emotions and ect, rather then just telling us, cuz it's sooo easy for a writer to fall into that laziness. Beautiful story, wonderful characters; I'm mesmerized. I'm pretty positive I've read you on here before-I read at least 3-4 hours a day online , so it gets hard to remember all my found treasures-I'm straight off going to double check. If this is the only offering, I'm afraid I may become a friendly stalker, begging for MORE!