rate_review Reviews

I love love love love love this! You actually gave me my dream guy in the Lord. Laughs* Tall with shoulder length black hair and ruthlessness hotness? Irresistible!

Hey, I'm a bit confused at something. Is Athena 6'6 or 5'6? Because if she's 6'6 and only 175 pounds, that doesn't strike me as rather strong looking. Wouldn't she look very skinny then?

I love her fight and spirit. She's a true heroine and kick ass if I ever read one. I love her. And I love lord Ambrose's no-nonsense. God, that's so freaking hot. Your writing style is awesome. It's casual and comforting, yet still is rich with plot and laden with wonderful expression and...oh, crap, what's the word...imagery! I'm very sight impaired, and the face that I can see everything you describe is a true accomplishment. I absolutely love it.

I hope you continue this story! Please update soon! And I truly hope everything is going all right for you in your life. *taps chapter 2 I think it was.)

I hope she gets her hair back. I wish there was something in that place, water, the air...something...that could make it grow a bit faster than it would on earth. I'll just have to see! I can't wait to see how he reacts to her CD player and all the other stuff. *grins!*

Again, incredible job and please update soon!

Thanks. I do need one. My old beta...well I have not spoken to him in months. So if you want just email me at Hbkfan2104@aol.com.

This story has a great plot, but the grammar and spelling is not so good...if you need a beta, I am more than happy to help.